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Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste? v.24

Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. v. 24
In recent years, household misuse recycling is a moot issue and a lot of arguments could be observed among people regarding whether people should spontaneously take part in recycling process or government should make it a legal obligation. While I agree that new legislation to force people to recycle could help this situation, I believe that setting a law is not only measure that the state should take. On the one hand, a new legal provision would be one possible way to tackle the waste problem. This law might be added to the rights and obligations of a citizen in the country to encourage and prevent misbehaviour of recycling. For example, the government could establish a law for householder to separate all garbage into different bins and people who fail to adhere to this legislation could be punish small fine to community service. In addition, while we have strict laws and punishments for behaviours that lead to environmental pollution, such as deforestation, governments should have clear rules for recycling that is a convenient and easy protecting environment process. On the other hand, I believe that governments should do more than introduce a rule. Knowledge of recycling can be put into education as an after-school subject for students. For example, children who learn about recycling and the environmental impact of household misuse have higher conceive than another. Beside of that, the politics, should encourage services and advertisements that support the utilization of regenerative materials and accommodate customers with renewable productions. In conclusion, the legal obligations are necessary to encourage household waste recycling. While laws are enforced, other factors such as education, advertisement and services should be encourage to people to dispose of their waste more responsibly.
In recent years, household misuse
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recycling
is a moot issue and
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a lot of
arguments could
be observed
among
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people
regarding whether
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people
should
spontaneously
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take part
in
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recycling
process or
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government
should
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make
it a legal obligation. While I
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agree
that new legislation to force
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people
to recycle could
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help
this situation, I believe that setting a
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law
is not
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only
measure that the state should take.

On the one hand, a new legal provision would be one possible way to tackle the waste problem. This
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law
might be
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added
to the rights and obligations of a citizen in the country to
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encourage
and
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prevent
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misbehaviour
of
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recycling
.
For example
, the
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government
could establish a
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law
for householder to separate all garbage into
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
bins and
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people
who fail to adhere to this legislation could be
Consider using the past participle "punished"?
punish
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small
fine to community service.
In addition
, while we have strict
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laws
and punishments for
Possible spelling mistake. 'behaviours' is British English.
behaviours
that lead to environmental pollution, such as deforestation,
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governments
should have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
clear
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
rules
for
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recycling
that is
a convenient and easy protecting environment process.

On the other hand
, I believe that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
governments
should do more than introduce a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
rule
. Knowledge of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycling
can
be put
into education as an after-school subject for students.
For example
, children who learn about
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycling
and the environmental impact of household misuse have higher conceive than another. Beside of that, the politics, should
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
encourage
services and advertisements that support the utilization of regenerative materials and accommodate customers with renewable productions.

In conclusion
, the legal obligations are necessary to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
encourage
household waste
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recycling
. While
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laws
are enforced
, other factors such as education, advertisement and services should be
Consider using the past participle "encouraged"?
encourage
to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
to dispose of their waste more
responsibly
.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. v. 24

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
285 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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