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Some people think that a person can never understand the culture of a country unless they speak the language Do you agree with this opinion v.2

Some people think that a person can never understand the culture of a country unless they speak the language Do you agree with this opinion v. 2
Language is very important in all the world and for an individual to progress in a foreign country it is much important for him/her to understand the language of that country so that he/she will be able to know about the culture, way of dealing with local people. I believe that local language of a nation play a great role in the development of a person in foreign countries. First of all, when a person travel to some other country, for every purpose such as education, business and immigration, he/she needs to understand the language of that particular place, and it will help very much in daily routine works. For instance, of a person travel to a foreign country for education, and he/she did not know about local language, there will be a lot of problems face to him/her and as a result that person will not be able to acquire full command on his/her education. Furthermore, if some is doing business in a foreign country so that person needs to deal with local of that place and for best dealing he/she needs to have full command on local language. Individuals needs to follow the culture and civilization of a foreign country and without knowing about language it seems to be difficult for every person. Therefore, I agree that for progressing in a foreign country, a person to have full command on language of that local area, and it helps in understanding of the culture and civilization of a nation and make easy to deal with local people for different purposes.
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foreign
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country
it is much
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important
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will be able to know about the culture, way of dealing with
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local
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people
. I believe that
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local
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of a nation play a great role in the development of a
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person
in
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countries.

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of that particular place, and it will
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much in daily routine works.
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for education, and
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will not be able to acquire full command on his/her education.

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. Individuals
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to follow the culture and civilization of a
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and without knowing about
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it seems to be difficult for every person.

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, I
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foreign
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language
of that
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area, and it
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in understanding of the culture and civilization of a nation and
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easy to deal with
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for
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purposes.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
42Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes
Knowledge of languages is the doorway to wisdom.
Roger Bacon

IELTS essay Some people think that a person can never understand the culture of a country unless they speak the language Do you agree with this opinion v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
261 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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