Todays, using other country language is made uncomfortable and feel too hard in other country. Many immigrants prepare other country language when they would move to other country. People feel hard to a speak second language and feel hard to join with different culture people. I want to discuss how making harmony with other countries people.
People feel comfortable when they are using mother tongue. So, many immigrants tend to usually speak their own language with their friends. Furthermore, people feel hard to learn and using a second language with local people. People usually avoid their speaking chance, when they have speaking opportunity with local people or their neighbor. Many immigrants already has their culture community apps on their phone and same country friends. They usually talk and message through a phone app with their friends. Even though people looking for same country culture people when they want to date with someone.
In my opinion, there are several solutions. Making new friends is the best way to harmony with local people. Only talking with compatriots can cause to isolate some immigrants from local people. Also, I think many immigrants have to open mind about second language and different culture. And people have to close relationship with their neighbors and local people. Small talk with their neighbor can cause harmony with other culture people. Furthermore, great place to making a friend is in their school or college. And going to a local event with their new local friends can good start great relationship.
In conclusion, many immigrants tend to comfortable circumstance when they make a friend. Even, they live in other country. In my point of view, they have to try to speak with local people.
Todays
, using
other
country
language
is made
uncomfortable and
feel
too
hard
in
other
country
.
Many
immigrants
prepare
other
country
language
when they would
move
to
other
country
.
People
feel
hard
to
a speak
second
language
and
feel
hard
to
join
with
different
culture
people
. I want to discuss how making harmony with
other
countries
people
.
People
feel
comfortable when they are using mother tongue.
So
,
many
immigrants
tend to
usually
speak their
own
language
with their
friends
.
Furthermore
,
people
feel
hard
to learn and using a second
language
with
local
people
.
People
usually
avoid their speaking chance, when they have speaking opportunity with
local
people
or their neighbor.
Many
immigrants
already has their
culture
community apps on their phone and same
country
friends
. They
usually
talk and message through a phone app with their
friends
.
Even though
people
looking for same
country
culture
people
when they want to date with someone.
In my opinion, there are several solutions. Making new
friends
is the best way to harmony with
local
people
.
Only
talking with compatriots can cause to isolate
some
immigrants
from
local
people
.
Also
, I
think
many
immigrants
have to
open mind about second
language
and
different
culture
. And
people
have to
close relationship with their neighbors and
local
people
.
Small
talk with their neighbor can cause harmony with
other
culture
people
.
Furthermore
, great place to making a
friend
is in their school or college. And going to a
local
event
with their new
local
friends
can
good
start
great relationship.
In conclusion
,
many
immigrants
tend to comfortable circumstance when they
make
a
friend
. Even, they
live
in
other
country
. In my point of view, they
have to
try to speak with
local
people
.
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