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Some people think that learning the language and culture of a country is essential when you live in a country for a long time To what extent do you agree or disagree v.2

Some people think that learning the language and culture of a country is essential when you live in a country for a long time v. 2
It is sometimes suggested that foreign person might leave in certain country for a long time, therefore this people will be able to stay like a native humans in the long run. I strongly agree that human may learn from unknown country all their habits and language. Firstly, this essay will discuss people’s adaptability, and secondly, it will analyze the possible events in human’s life. The primary reason why person might easily study language and traditions of different country is that many humans are easily modify their habits. This is because people will be able to communicate with native speakers and participate anyone restaurants. As a result it is a golden opportunity for people to improve their communication skills with native speakers, also they will be took traditions of humans with modified vision to the world. A prime example is University of Oxford, which provided a research, where they was recognized that 63 per cent of people are learn new language during their life in unknown country. Another point to consider is that all countries have own traditional events, which person may participate. The reason for this is that person will clearly ask for some early event, which people might participate. As a consequence this people will be recognized habits of native environment, and person might participate some tournaments for familiarize with their likely sport. For instance, University of Harvard was provided an experiment, where they send people to some events in certain countries, as a result humans was told about all traditions of exactly country after happening. In conclusion, I am firmly convinced that learning the language and culture of a certain country is common process during people’s life in exactly country. This is due to the fact that person may easy adapt for new country and humans may participate some events with other people.
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all their habits and
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language
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, this essay will discuss
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people’s
adaptability, and
secondly
, it will analyze the possible
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events
in
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human’s
life.

The primary reason why
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person
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might
easily
study
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language
and traditions of
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country
is that
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humans
are
easily
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modify
their habits. This is
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people
will be able to communicate with
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anyone restaurants.
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it is a golden opportunity for
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also
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humans
with modified vision to the world. A prime example is University of Oxford, which provided a research, where they
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was
recognized that 63 per cent of
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people
are learn new
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language
during their life in unknown country.

Another point to consider is that all
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countries
have
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traditional
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participate
. As a consequence this
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will
be recognized
habits of
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native
environment, and
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person
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participate
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tournaments for familiarize with their likely sport.
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an experiment, where they
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about all traditions of exactly
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after happening.

In conclusion
, I am
firmly
convinced that learning the
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language
and culture of a certain
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country
is common process during
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people’s
life in exactly
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country
.
This is due to the fact that
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person
may
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easy
adapt for new
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country
and
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humans
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with other
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13Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
54Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes
He who knows no foreign languages knows nothing of his own.
Johann Wolfgang von Goethe

IELTS essay Some people think that learning the language and culture of a country is essential when you live in a country for a long time v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
306 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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