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More and more newspapers and news channels are using photographs to support their news articles and stories Some people think photographs are not a reliable source of news while others consider photographs to be irrefutable Discuss both sides and give you v.2

More and more newspapers and news channels are using photographs to support their news articles and stories Some people think photographs are not a reliable source of news while others consider photographs to be irrefutable 2
Nowadays, one of the most prominent issues is related to authentic information. Some people advocate that news should be published with photos which support facts, while others suppose that people should not trust photos. From my point of view, photographs allow not only to spice up the article but also display the reality of events. One of the main reasons to support this is that photos show how a certain event looked actually. That would mean that newsreaders might see the picture of events a whole and better understand information. For instance, if the article reports about workers strike in Greece, newsreaders will know not only different facts from the text but also through photographs they will see the crowd of striking people, their emotions, government, and police actions. Moreover, photos complement the text of the article and evoke emotions among readers, who image the event and feel the anger of the striking workers. One might argue that using photos with news articles does not guarantee the full veracity of information. Sometimes photos serve as the propaganda tool and impose readers certain views on the country. Regarding the example of this fact, some newspapers describe horrible consequences of the economic crisis in one country and publish relevant photos, after which people from another part of the world believe that people in this country starve, workers strike at streets and riots across the country. However, actually, an economic crisis in this country might have negative effects, but not so terrible, as it shows photos. Based on the above-mentioned facts, it can be concluded that photographs give people additional information about happened events and evoke feelings of readers, but in some cases, photos serve as the propaganda tool.
Nowadays, one of the most prominent issues
is related
to authentic
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information
.
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Some
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people
advocate that news should
be published
with
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photos
which support facts, while others suppose that
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people
should not trust
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photos
. From my point of view, photographs
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allow
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only
to spice up the
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article
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but
also
display the reality of
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events
.

One of the main reasons to support this is that
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photos
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show
how a certain
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event
looked actually. That would mean that newsreaders might
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see
the picture of
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events
a whole and better understand
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information
.
For instance
, if the
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article
reports about workers strike in Greece, newsreaders will know not
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only
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different
facts from the text
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but
also
through photographs they will
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see
the crowd of striking
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people
, their emotions,
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government
, and police actions.
Moreover
,
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photos
complement the text of the
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article
and evoke emotions among readers, who image the
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event
and feel the anger of the striking workers.

One might argue that using
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photos
with news
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articles
does not guarantee the full veracity of
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information
.
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Sometimes
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photos
serve as the propaganda tool and impose readers certain views on the
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country
. Regarding the example of this
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fact
,
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some
newspapers
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describe
horrible consequences of the economic crisis in one
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country
and publish relevant
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photos
, after which
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people
from another part of the world believe that
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people
in this
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country
starve, workers strike at streets and riots across the
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country
.
However
, actually, an economic crisis in this
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country
might have
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negative
effects,
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but
not
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so
terrible, as it
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shows
photos.

Based on the above-mentioned facts, it can
be concluded
that photographs give
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additional
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information
about happened
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events
and evoke feelings of readers,
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but
in
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some
cases,
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photos
serve as the propaganda tool.
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IELTS essay More and more newspapers and news channels are using photographs to support their news articles and stories Some people think photographs are not a reliable source of news while others consider photographs to be irrefutable 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
286 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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