Some people think parents should be forced to attend childcare course to learn how to take care of their children. Do you agree v.1
Some people think parents should be forced to attend childcare course to learn how to take care of their children. Do you agree v. 1
In every time parent's knowledge and experience always have a big effect on their child. But now day, a lot of parent don't have the knowledge to raise a child; they just took their kid to school, and let the teacher take over. I think how to build a child to improve their true potential is the parent attend childcare courses, and it would help them to raise a youngster. So I agree a forced couples to attend a parenting course.
Firstly, Parents influences their child's behaviour, growth, health, indirectly because children like a sponge they do the same things that the father or mother does. So if the parent doesn't know about being a "true parent" also their kids negative examples can be influenced to a child's development and can lead to bad behaviour.
Secondly, a lot of parents, when having the first child, will feel disturbed when raising their children. From take care of them when they are babies, toddler age, to choose school when they in child age, how to deal with child poverty. The courses will help parents learn what their child needs at each developmental stage as well as prepare for the next stages for them. I think if the parent knows and be prepared in each stage they. Will raise their child with good qualities.
Next, I think born and raise a child is very hard; when you decide to have a baby and raise them, you need a lot of courage and determination. And I think the key to be a good parent is confidence, so I think to attend a childcare course not only to prepare knowledge to be a parent but also mentally for them.
In conclusion, I believe that childcare will help parents to understand their kids and raise them in the best way.
In every time parent's knowledge and experience always have a
big
effect on their
child
.
But
now
day,
a lot of
parent
don't have the knowledge to
raise
a
child
; they
just
took their kid to school, and
let
the teacher take over. I
think
how to build a
child
to
improve
their true potential is the
parent
attend childcare courses, and it would
help
them to
raise
a youngster.
So
I
agree
a forced
couples
to attend a parenting course.
Firstly
,
Parents
influences their child's
behaviour
, growth, health,
indirectly
because
children like a sponge they do the same things that the father or mother does.
So
if the
parent
doesn't know about being a
"
true parent
"
also
their kids
negative
examples can
be influenced
to a child's development and can lead to
bad
behaviour
.
Secondly
,
a lot of
parents
, when having the
first
child
, will feel disturbed when raising their children. From take care of them when they are babies, toddler age, to choose school when they in
child
age, how to deal with
child
poverty. The courses will
help
parents
learn what their
child
needs at each developmental stage
as well
as prepare for the
next
stages for them. I
think
if the
parent
knows and
be prepared
in each stage they. Will
raise
their
child
with
good
qualities.
Next
, I
think
born and
raise
a
child
is
very
hard
; when you decide to have a baby and
raise
them, you need
a lot of
courage and determination. And I
think
the key to be a
good
parent
is confidence,
so
I
think
to attend a childcare course not
only
to prepare knowledge to be a
parent
but
also
mentally for them.
In conclusion
, I believe that childcare will
help
parents
to understand their kids and
raise
them in the best way.
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