It is argued that theatre, art and music should be considered as the prime subjects like maths and science at the elementary level. This essay disagrees with that statement because there are more career opportunities in the field of the main subjects like math, and it is more important to clear the basic concept of these subjects at primary level.
If people pursue their studies in art and music, fewer employment options are available to them. This is because music and art have a limited career scope as it depends on the person’s talent and not everyone is gifted with a good voice or better acting skills. For example, a recent survey in India exhibits that more than 50% of the artists who wanted to pursue their job in acting or music are jobless and cannot feed their families due to unemployment.
Another reason why math and science should be given more importance than art is the fact that the foundation of these subjects is built at the elementary level. In other words, if the concept of students about the basic principle is not clear, they cannot solve difficult problems in high school. For instance, Algebra is a branch of mathematics which students study at primary level and failing to understand it, will lead to the problems in solving applications of Algebra in high school.
In conclusion, music and art should not be given equal importance as other subjects, especially at the elementary level because there are more chances of finding jobs if people pursue their career in core subjects, and it is important to know the fundamental idea of the main subjects at junior school.
It
is argued
that
theatre
,
art
and
music
should
be considered
as the prime
subjects
like
maths
and science at the elementary
level
. This essay disagrees with that statement
because
there are more career opportunities in the field of the main
subjects
like math, and it is more
important
to
clear
the basic concept of these
subjects
at primary level.
If
people
pursue their studies in
art
and
music
, fewer employment options are available to them. This is
because
music
and
art
have a limited career scope as it depends on the person’s talent and not everyone
is gifted
with a
good
voice or better acting
skills
.
For example
, a recent survey in India exhibits that more than 50% of the artists who wanted to pursue their job in acting or
music
are jobless and cannot feed their families due to unemployment.
Another reason why math and science should be
given
more importance than
art
is the fact that the foundation of these
subjects
is built
at the elementary
level
.
In other words
, if the concept of students about the basic principle is not
clear
, they cannot solve difficult problems in high school.
For instance
, Algebra is a branch of mathematics which students study at primary
level
and failing to understand it, will lead to the problems in solving applications of Algebra in high school.
In conclusion
,
music
and
art
should not be
given
equal importance as other
subjects
,
especially
at the elementary
level
because
there are more chances of finding jobs if
people
pursue their career in core
subjects
, and it is
important
to know the fundamental
idea
of the main
subjects
at junior school.
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