Some people think certain prisoners should be made to do unpaid community work instead of being put behind bars. To what extent do you agree? v.13
Some people think certain prisoners should be made to do unpaid community work instead of being put behind bars. v. 13
It is undeniably true that the crime rate is increasing day by day, and so is the burden on the jails. Some people believe that bounding the prisoners to work for the community, without being paid, is far better than locking them up in the prisons. I completely agree with this point of view and following are the reasons to believe so.
Firstly, if a policy is made to modify the punishment of the prisoners, such that they spend time doing unpaid community work, this could benefit the society and the people to a great extent. For example, if the educated prisoners are made to teach the children, especially the ones who belong to a poor socioeconomic class, this would be an extreme help in improving the graph of education, as more and more children would get the opportunity to get educated. Similarly, the accused ones, who are good mechanics, if made to work at garages without a salary, would turn out to be a helping hand for the workers over there.
Secondly, working for the public, changes the mindset of the criminals and they start thinking differently. For instance, when they spend their punishment period in the lockups, they are in an environment that does not change them much and after leaving the jail, they get back on the same track. However, if they are made to serve the community, such as by cleaning the floors of the shopping malls or by nursing the sick people, their mind gets diverted from the criminal thoughts. Therefore, when they end their period of punishment, they transform into decent and helpful individuals.
To conclude, if the criminals are made to do the community services, this would not only improve the society, as the crime rate would fall and they would help in a variety of sectors, but it would have an enormous positive impact on the prisoners' personalities, as well.
It is
undeniably
true that the crime rate is increasing day by day, and
so
is the burden on the jails.
Some
people
believe that bounding the prisoners to work for the
community
, without
being paid
, is far better than locking them up in the prisons. I completely
agree
with this point of view and following are the reasons to believe
so
.
Firstly
, if a policy
is made
to modify the punishment of the prisoners, such that they spend time doing unpaid
community
work, this could benefit the society and the
people
to a great extent.
For example
, if the educated prisoners
are made
to teach the children,
especially
the
ones
who belong to a poor socioeconomic
class
, this would be an extreme
help
in improving the graph of education, as more and more children would
get
the opportunity to
get
educated.
Similarly
, the accused
ones
, who are
good
mechanics, if made to work at garages without a salary, would turn out to be a helping hand for the workers over there.
Secondly
, working for the public,
changes
the mindset of the
criminals and
they
start
thinking
differently
.
For instance
, when they spend their punishment period in the lockups, they are in an environment that does not
change
them much and after leaving the jail, they
get
back on the same
track
.
However
, if they
are made
to serve the
community
, such as by cleaning the floors of the shopping malls or by nursing the sick
people
, their mind
gets
diverted from the criminal thoughts.
Therefore
, when they
end
their period of punishment, they transform into decent and helpful individuals.
To conclude
, if the criminals
are made
to do the
community
services, this would not
only
improve
the society, as the crime rate would
fall and
they would
help
in a variety of sectors,
but
it would have an enormous
positive
impact on the prisoners' personalities,
as well
.
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