As is known, these days, a majority of countries suffer from less happier community. Therefore, some suggest that it is considerably crucial for countries to fill the gap between wealthy and impoverished people. I somewhat agree with the above-mentioned idea as the arguments for and against it are equal. This essay will discuss some reasons of this issue.
The major reason why I think that the governments should not discriminate among their population is because people may not have self-confidence in this regard. To be more specific, the authorities might build free of charge schools which are used by both poor and rich students in order to children do not feel any discrepancy between them. This education may help people to find an efficient position in work life, as a result of which they can have a stable revenue. Consequently, the distinction between the poor and the rich can vanish.
Another convincing argument is that as I have mentioned before the jurisdictions play a vital role in people's life. That is to say, they might make people at the same level. For instance, free hospitals can be built, and people may be provided with the free treatments which are required from them. Furthermore, intellectual, but poor people might be equipped with a well-paid job which is the opportunity for them to work with the rich together.
By way of conclusion, considering aforementioned arguments, I somehow agree that if all people have self-satisfaction, this society can be the happiest one. I hope that all governments ought to do a variety of reforms so as to remove discrimination between people.
As
is known
, these days, a majority of countries suffer from
less happier
community.
Therefore
,
some
suggest that it is
considerably
crucial for countries to fill the gap between wealthy and impoverished
people
. I somewhat
agree
with the above-mentioned
idea
as the arguments for and against it are equal. This essay will discuss
some
reasons of this issue.
The major reason why I
think
that the
governments
should not discriminate among their population is
because
people
may not have self-confidence in this regard. To be more specific, the authorities might build free of charge schools which are
used
by both poor and rich students in order to children do not feel any discrepancy between them. This education may
help
people
to find an efficient position in work life,
as a result
of which they can have a stable revenue.
Consequently
, the distinction between the poor and the rich can vanish.
Another convincing argument is that as I have mentioned
before
the jurisdictions play a vital role in
people
's life.
That is
to say, they might
make
people
at the same level.
For instance
, free hospitals can
be built
, and
people
may
be provided
with the free treatments which
are required
from them.
Furthermore
, intellectual,
but
poor
people
might
be equipped
with a well-paid job which is the opportunity for them to work with the rich together.
By way of conclusion, considering aforementioned arguments, I somehow
agree
that if all
people
have self-satisfaction, this society can be the happiest one. I hope that all
governments
ought to do a variety of reforms
so as to
remove discrimination between
people
.
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7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes