Raising children in extended families are favoured by some people, however some may disagree including me as well. This essay will discuss the reasons why children should be brought up just by their parents.
Firstly, there should be an agreement between parents about the conditions and the standard of discipline they are providing to raise their children properly. Each family has their own rules and standards which are different from one family to another. Therefore, children could be confused about what is right or wrong based on what they learn from their parents and things they are taught by their. This kind of confusion could act as bad behaviour patterns for adolescents. For example, imagine there is a child whose parents teach her not to lie, however; when she sees her uncle lying about smoking to his parents, she could easily lose the perspective whether she may lie or not in the future.
Secondly, if parents have the chance to raise their children on their own, in my honest opinion, the whole procedure will be more programmable, focused and efficient as well. Children will benefit from the quietness of their home instead of being in a crowded environment with so many activities that do not suit them. They would have more time for reading books, exercising and so many extra activities. For instance, there are many children who are nursed by their grandparents and they are just taking care of their essential needs like food and changing their diapers and not practicing any creative plays or reading books and so on.
Raising
children
in extended families are
favoured
by
some
people
,
however
some
may disagree including me
as well
. This essay will discuss the reasons why
children
should
be brought
up
just
by their parents.
Firstly
, there should be an agreement between
parents
about the conditions and the standard of discipline they are providing to raise their
children
properly
. Each family has
their
own
rules
and standards which are
different
from one family to another.
Therefore
,
children
could
be confused
about what is right or
wrong
based on what they learn from their
parents
and things they
are taught
by their. This kind of confusion could act as
bad
behaviour
patterns for adolescents.
For example
, imagine there is a child whose
parents
teach her not to lie,
however
; when she
sees
her uncle lying about smoking to his
parents
, she could
easily
lose the perspective whether she may lie or not in the future.
Secondly
, if
parents
have the chance to raise their
children
on their
own
, in my honest opinion, the whole procedure will be more programmable, focused and efficient
as well
.
Children
will benefit from the quietness of their home
instead
of being in a crowded environment with
so
many
activities that do not suit them. They would have more time for reading books, exercising and
so
many
extra activities.
For instance
, there are
many
children
who
are nursed
by their
grandparents and
they are
just
taking care of their essential needs like food and changing their diapers and not practicing any creative plays or reading books and
so
on.
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12Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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