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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is to travel or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. v.1

Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is to travel or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. v. 1
Any language which is not officially spoken in a particular place is called a foreign language. In my opinion, knowledge of a foreign language has many advantages beside its use in travel and work. (34) In ancient times, people had totally unfamiliar with foreign languages as they had rarely travelled from one place to another or worked abroad. In the present world, the knowledge of a foreign language is necessary in order to meet the standards of International Institutions and Offices. It is necessary for the people, who are travelling abroad frequently or doing any kind of work there, to learn a foreign language in order to interact with new cultures and people and to get a reasonable job. (83) The recent advancement in Science and Technology has turned the whole world into a global village. Nowadays, many International brands and companies have opened their offices and franchises across the globe. While hiring employees, they demanded expertise in foreign languages in addition to academic qualifications. Similarly, in the field of education, all the foreign universities have set a certain language requirement for students seeking admission in higher studies abroad. Therefore, it has now become compulsory for everyone to have an additional skill of foreign language expertise. If the attitude of the world towards the language requirement keeps in motion with such zeal and zest, then learning a foreign language will definitely become the need of the hour in the near future. (119) Thus, in my opinion, the knowledge of a foreign language is not only an entry requirement for travel and work abroad, it is also a compulsory condition for anyone who wants to interact with the International community. (36)
Any
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language
which is not
officially
spoken in a particular place
is called
a
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foreign
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language
. In my opinion, knowledge of a
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foreign
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language
has
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many
advantages beside its
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use
in travel and work. (34)

In ancient times,
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people
had
totally
unfamiliar with
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foreign
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languages
as they had rarely travelled from one place to another or worked
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abroad
. In the present world, the knowledge of a
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foreign
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language
is necessary in order to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
the standards of International Institutions and Offices. It is necessary for the
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people
, who are travelling
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abroad
frequently
or doing any kind of work there, to learn a
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foreign
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language
in order to interact with new cultures and
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people
and to
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get
a reasonable job. (83)

The recent advancement in Science and Technology has turned the whole world into a global village. Nowadays,
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many
International brands and
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companies
have opened their offices and franchises across the globe. While hiring employees, they demanded expertise in
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foreign
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languages
in addition
to academic qualifications.
Similarly
, in the field of education, all the
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foreign
universities have set a certain
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language
requirement for students seeking admission in higher studies
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abroad
.
Therefore
, it has
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
become compulsory for everyone to have an additional
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skill
of
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foreign
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language
expertise. If the attitude of the world towards the
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language
requirement
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keeps
in motion with such zeal and zest, then learning a
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foreign
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language
will definitely become the need of the hour in the near future. (119)

Thus
, in my opinion, the knowledge of a
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foreign
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language
is not
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only
an entry requirement for travel and work
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abroad
, it is
also
a compulsory condition for anyone who wants to interact with the International community. (36)
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
26Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is to travel or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
279 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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