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some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. others say that these are not the only reason why someone should learn a foreign language. v. 32

In this new generation, some other way have to become educated to speak in different language even in the internet. Nowadays, the mankind they have easy to interact with the people and also learn an external dialect. Even though in the nursery section the human kind know how to speech. In this essay, it is my view that learning tongue it is needed to travel or job in the other places, so that they are necessary to talk idiom. In this new modern technology is the huge help of the masses how to communicate and also learn. Firstly, it's the human want to know the word they need help herself and have a confidence to say. Although, it is difficult, but the public need to sacrifice so that they achieve their goal. For example, the google, and the dictionary is the one material that gives information and also knowledge to the learner. However, they look it is tricky, but if the society is eager to understand they find out the way. Resulting in this, if the public is interested is not important travel abroad to have skills speak a foreign dialect. Secondly, if mankind wants to have a training in this matter, the institute they are also teaching an English subject. Reason in this, humans know and have an idea how to talk alien expression. Thirdly, society needs more in practice in reading so that their skills want to enhance and in the community have a free library it they have time they visit and study. For instance, watching different foreign movies is the biggest help to feed masses brain. Because they review their mind and also practice. Moreover, sharing ideas and asking a friend also can give a feedback, so that their skills more thought. In conclusion, learning an outward declaim human they do not need travel or work so that they are know how to talk, even though in their self they improve their capacity. In my opinion, reading, watching movies and search in the internet people how to tell the foreign word. It's not crucial mankind are intelligent the most important is humankind can understand.

IELTS essay some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. others say that these are not the only reason why someone should learn a foreign language. discuss both these view and give your own opinion. v.32

In this new generation,
some
other way
have to
become educated to speak in
different
language even
in the internet
. Nowadays, the mankind they have easy to interact with the
people
and
also
learn an external dialect.
Even though
in the nursery section the human kind know how to speech. In this essay, it is my view that learning tongue it
is needed
to travel or job in the other places,
so
that they are necessary to talk idiom. In this new modern technology is the huge
help
of the masses how to communicate and
also
learn.
Firstly
, it's the human want to know the word they need
help
herself and have a confidence to say. Although, it is difficult,
but
the public need to sacrifice
so
that they achieve their goal.
For example
, the
google
, and the dictionary is the one material that gives information and
also
knowledge to the learner.
However
, they look it is tricky,
but
if the society is eager to understand they find out the way. Resulting in this, if the public
is interested
is not
important
travel abroad to have
skills
speak a foreign dialect.
Secondly
, if mankind wants to have a training in this matter, the institute they are
also
teaching an English subject. Reason in this, humans know and have an
idea
how to talk alien expression.
Thirdly
, society needs more in practice in reading
so
that their
skills
want to enhance and in the community have a free library
it
they have time they visit and study.
For instance
, watching
different
foreign movies is the biggest
help
to feed masses brain.
Because
they review their mind and
also
practice.
Moreover
, sharing
ideas
and asking a friend
also
can give a feedback,
so
that their
skills
more
thought
.
In conclusion
, learning an outward declaim human they do not need travel or work
so
that they are know how to talk,
even though
in their self they
improve
their capacity. In my opinion, reading, watching movies and search in the internet
people
how to
tell
the foreign word. It's not crucial mankind are intelligent the most
important
is humankind can understand.
16Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
33Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes
4 paragraphs
358 words
8.5
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