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some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. others say that these are not the only reason why someone should learn a foreign language. discuss both these view and give your own opinion. v.32

some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. others say that these are not the only reason why someone should learn a foreign language. v. 32
In this new generation, some other way have to become educated to speak in different language even in the internet. Nowadays, the mankind they have easy to interact with the people and also learn an external dialect. Even though in the nursery section the human kind know how to speech. In this essay, it is my view that learning tongue it is needed to travel or job in the other places, so that they are necessary to talk idiom. In this new modern technology is the huge help of the masses how to communicate and also learn. Firstly, it's the human want to know the word they need help herself and have a confidence to say. Although, it is difficult, but the public need to sacrifice so that they achieve their goal. For example, the google, and the dictionary is the one material that gives information and also knowledge to the learner. However, they look it is tricky, but if the society is eager to understand they find out the way. Resulting in this, if the public is interested is not important travel abroad to have skills speak a foreign dialect. Secondly, if mankind wants to have a training in this matter, the institute they are also teaching an English subject. Reason in this, humans know and have an idea how to talk alien expression. Thirdly, society needs more in practice in reading so that their skills want to enhance and in the community have a free library it they have time they visit and study. For instance, watching different foreign movies is the biggest help to feed masses brain. Because they review their mind and also practice. Moreover, sharing ideas and asking a friend also can give a feedback, so that their skills more thought. In conclusion, learning an outward declaim human they do not need travel or work so that they are know how to talk, even though in their self they improve their capacity. In my opinion, reading, watching movies and search in the internet people how to tell the foreign word. It's not crucial mankind are intelligent the most important is humankind can understand.
In this new generation,
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some
other way
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
become educated to speak in
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
language even
The usual collocation for technology is "on," not "in." It is better to say this: "on the internet".
in the internet
. Nowadays, the mankind they have easy to interact with the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
and
also
learn an external dialect.
“Even though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Even though
in the nursery section the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
human
kind
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
know
how to speech. In this essay, it is my view that learning tongue it
is needed
to travel or job in the other places,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that they are necessary to talk idiom. In this new modern technology is the huge
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
of the masses how to communicate and
also
learn.

Firstly
, it's the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
human
want to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
know
the word they
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
need
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
herself and have a confidence to say. Although, it is difficult,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
the public
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
need
to sacrifice
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that they achieve their goal.
For example
, the
"Google" is a proper noun and needs to be capitalized.
google
, and the dictionary is the one material that gives information and
also
knowledge to the learner.
However
, they look it is tricky,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
if the society is eager to understand they find out the way. Resulting in this, if the public
is interested
is not
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
travel abroad to have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
speak a foreign dialect.

Secondly
, if mankind wants to have a training in this matter, the institute they are
also
teaching an English subject. Reason in this,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
humans
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
know
and have an
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
idea
how to talk alien expression.
Thirdly
, society
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
needs
more in practice in reading
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
want to enhance and in the community have a free library
Consider adding a comma here.
it
they have time they visit and study.
For instance
, watching
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
foreign movies is the biggest
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
to feed masses brain.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Because
they review their mind and
also
practice.
Moreover
, sharing
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
ideas
and asking a friend
also
can give a feedback,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
more
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
thought
.

In conclusion
, learning an outward declaim
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
human
they do not
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
need
travel or work
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that they are
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
know
how to talk,
even though
in their self they
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
their capacity. In my opinion, reading, watching movies and search in the internet
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
how to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
tell
the foreign word. It's not crucial mankind are intelligent the most
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
is humankind can understand.
8.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8.5Mistakes

IELTS essay some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. others say that these are not the only reason why someone should learn a foreign language. v. 32

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
358 words
8.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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