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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. v.29

Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. v. 29
Nowadays, learning a foreign language has become increasingly popular among the people. A part of the society believes that in order to travel in other countries or work overseas, one must learn a secondary language. While, others think that learning a foreign vocabulary is not only limited to these reasons. This essay will discuss why these skills are important for a career and travelling but, why they offer far more benefits. It is believed by the public that one must acquire these skills before moving abroad. People who move to other countries are exposed to a global village, a place comprising of the public from various backgrounds and languages. So it becomes compulsory to have a knowledge in a tongue that would eliminate communication barriers among the people. For instance, students who move overseas for their higher studies are required to have proficiency in English, so that they can easily communicate with the other scholars. For this reason, it is mandatory to learn a foreign tongue before visiting abroad. However, mastering a foreign language is not only limited to these causes. To begin with, dialect has always been seen as a beautiful set of skill, and it is also associated with intelligence. For example, a person is perceived to be intellectually superior when he has command over multiple languages. Furthermore, some sacred manuscripts are not accurately translated into mainstream languages and thus, in order to get a true essence of its meaning, one must read the scripture in its original form. As an example, Japanese comics are best read in its original form, and it loses its charm when they are translated in English. Thus, foreign communication skills enable a person to explore more by reading and listening foreign materials. In conclusion, vocabulary is now a valuable tool that everyone must possess. This essay discussed various reasons behind learning a new vocabulary. In my opinion, I believe mastering a secondary glossary is not only limited for a career and expeditions but also for other sources.
Nowadays, learning a
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foreign
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language
has become
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popular among the
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people
. A part of the society believes that in order to travel in
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other
countries or work overseas, one
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must
learn a secondary
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language
.
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, others
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think
that learning a
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foreign
vocabulary is not
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only
limited to these reasons. This essay will discuss why these
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skills
are
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important
for a career and travelling
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but
, why they offer far more benefits.

It
is believed
by the public that one
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must
acquire these
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skills
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before
moving abroad.
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People
who
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move
to
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other
countries
are exposed
to a global village, a place
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comprising of
the public from various backgrounds and
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languages
.
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So
it becomes compulsory to have
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a knowledge
in a tongue that would eliminate communication barriers among the
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people
.
For instance
, students who
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move
overseas for their higher studies
are required
to have proficiency in English,
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so
that they can
easily
communicate with the
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other
scholars.
For this reason
, it is mandatory to learn a
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foreign
tongue
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before
visiting abroad.

However
, mastering a
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foreign
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language
is not
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only
limited to these causes. To
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begin
with, dialect has always been
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seen
as a
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beautiful
set of
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skill
, and it is
also
associated with intelligence.
For example
, a person
is perceived
to be
intellectually
superior when he has command over multiple
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languages
.
Furthermore
,
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some
sacred manuscripts are not
accurately
translated into mainstream
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languages
and
thus
, in order to
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get
a true essence of its meaning, one
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must
read the scripture in its original form. As an example, Japanese comics are best read in its original form, and it loses its charm when they
are translated
in English.
Thus
,
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foreign
communication
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skills
enable a person to explore more by reading and listening
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foreign
materials.

In conclusion
, vocabulary is
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now
a valuable tool that everyone
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must
possess. This essay discussed various reasons behind learning a new vocabulary. In my opinion, I believe mastering a secondary glossary is not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
limited for a career and expeditions
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but
also
for
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other
sources.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. v. 29

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
335 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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