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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. v.26

Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. v. 26
There exists a controversy that learners engage themselves in mastering foreign languages is solely to be able to mingle into the oversea environment. While some people agree with this idea, others assert that there are more underlying factors motivating people to assimilate the languages which are not their mother tongue. The two statements will be discussed as follows and I would like to suggest my own point of view. In the first place, it is true that a majority of people spending time pursuing a language aim particularly at securing a decent job in a foreign country and travelling aboard. From these people’s perspectives, a well-paid occupation usually exists outside the border of their homeland. Therefore, in order to make ends meet, using effectively the language spoken in their destination is a top priority. In addition to this, people who are travelling-lovers usually want to perform several basic conversations with the locals, such as ordering food or paying the bill, to comfort themselves in a far-off country. Hence, they will probably gain the respect from the locals for the effort they have made in order to communicate, which can also be the unique reason pushing them to learn the language. On the other hand, there can be numerous motives when it comes to learning foreign languages that exist in others. Firstly, a great number of people want to have a profound comprehension about the oversea cultures. Secondly, besides solely being capable of communicating with native speakers, some people, especially youngsters, want to enjoy a foreign movie or a documentary without having to look at their first language subtitles. Finally, learning a new language has proven to be beneficial for the individual’s memory, which enhances its capacity as well as the sensitivity of the brain. Thus, acquiring the respective language is undoubtedly the most favourable option in order to achieve such wishes that probably cannot be satisfied via doing any other things. In conclusion, I personally find the latter statement more convincing as for the factors mentioned above. Learning a new language is to serve manifold needs of human which should be encouraged as much as possible.
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foreign
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languages
is
solely
to be able to mingle into the oversea environment. While
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some
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people
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agree
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idea
, others assert that there are more underlying factors motivating
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people
to assimilate the
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languages
which are not their mother tongue. The two statements will
be discussed
as follows and I would like to suggest my
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own
point of view.

In the
first
place, it is true that a majority of
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people
spending time pursuing a
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language
aim
particularly
at securing a decent job in a
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foreign
country and travelling aboard. From these
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people’s
perspectives, a well-paid occupation
usually
exists outside the border of their homeland.
Therefore
, in order to
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make
ends
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meet
, using
effectively
the
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language
spoken in their destination is a top priority.
In addition
to this,
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people
who are travelling-lovers
usually
want to perform several basic conversations with the locals, such as ordering food or paying the bill, to comfort themselves in a far-off country.
Hence
, they will
probably
gain the respect from the locals for the effort they have made in order to communicate, which can
also
be the unique reason pushing them to learn the language.

On the
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other
hand, there can be numerous motives when it
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comes
to learning
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foreign
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languages
that exist in others.
Firstly
, a great number of
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people
want to have a profound comprehension about the oversea cultures.
Secondly
,
besides
solely
being capable of communicating with native speakers,
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some
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people
,
especially
youngsters, want to enjoy a
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foreign
movie or a documentary without having to look at their
first
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language
subtitles.
Finally
, learning a new
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language
has proven to be beneficial for the individual’s memory, which enhances its capacity
as well
as the sensitivity of the brain.
Thus
, acquiring the respective
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language
is
undoubtedly
the most
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favourable
option in order to achieve such wishes that
probably
cannot
be satisfied
via doing any
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other
things.

In conclusion
, I
personally
find the latter statement more convincing as for the factors mentioned above. Learning a new
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language
is to serve manifold needs of human which should
be encouraged
as much as possible.
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IELTS essay Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. v. 26

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
356 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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