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Some people say that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for government to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their watse? v.2

Some people say that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for government to make it a legal requirement. v. 2
There exists a bitter true that in modern life, daily household trash and garbage are not entirely recycled. A great number of people assert that only by imposing laws on recycling as a compulsory legislation by the government will encourage people to recycle more. I personally agree that this method is necessary, but it is by no means the sole approach. In the first place, if recycling is a legal responsibility to be taken by the public, the amount of waste recycled will probably increase significantly. For a long time, recycling trash has always been an optional task to which people are under no obligation. Thus, there is a great deal of garbage left rotten or mishandled on the roads or in landfill sites. On the other hand, with the implementation of such policy, if not recycling properly, which is against the law, people will be fined in terms of money or even suffer from harsh punishment such as going into jails. In other words, this method will act as a deterrent factor, both discouraging people from dumping trash heedlessly and forcing people to engage in recycling more. However, making recycling as a legal requirement is not the only method to address such issue since there are others which can also prove to be effective as well. Firstly, it is advisable that the government should provide more readily available infrastructures and facilities serving recycling purposes in public areas. A lack of these necessary equipment would likely impede people’s daily recycling. Secondly, a more ambitious approach for long-term effects is to integrate a subject capable of enhancing students’ knowledge about the paramount importance of recycling in human life into schools’ curriculum. Since they are the owners of the Earth later on, it is a feasible idea to nurture children’s positive thoughts when it comes to recycling to change the mindset of the next generations in the future. In conclusion, turning recycling into a legally compulsory task can be beneficial in relation to boosting its popularity. Nevertheless, there exist more of alternatives to tackle the problem which can surprisingly be advantageous if done properly.
There exists a bitter true that in modern life, daily household trash and garbage are not
entirely
recycled. A great number of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
assert that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
by imposing laws on
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycling
as a compulsory legislation by the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
will encourage
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
to recycle more. I
personally
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agree
that this method is necessary,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
it is by no means the sole approach.

In the
first
place, if
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycling
is a legal responsibility to
be taken
by the public, the amount of waste recycled will
probably
increase
significantly
. For a long time,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycling
trash has always been an optional task to which
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
are under no obligation.
Thus
, there is a great deal of garbage
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
rotten or mishandled on the roads or in landfill sites.
On the other hand
, with the implementation of such policy, if not
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycling
properly
, which is against the law,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
will
be fined
in terms of money or even suffer from harsh punishment such as going into jails.
In other words
, this method will act as a deterrent factor, both discouraging
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
from dumping trash
heedlessly
and forcing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
to engage in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycling
more.

However
, making
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycling
as a legal requirement is not the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
method to address such issue since there are others which can
also
prove to be effective
as well
.
Firstly
, it is advisable that the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
should provide more
readily
available infrastructures and facilities serving
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycling
purposes in public areas. A lack of these necessary equipment would likely impede
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people’s
daily
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycling
.
Secondly
, a more ambitious approach for long-term effects is to integrate a subject capable of enhancing students’ knowledge about the paramount importance of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycling
in human life into schools’ curriculum. Since they are the owners of the Earth later on, it is a feasible
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
idea
to nurture children’s
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
thoughts when it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
comes
to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycling
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
the mindset of the
next
generations in the future.

In conclusion
, turning
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycling
into a
legally
compulsory task can be beneficial in relation to boosting its popularity.
Nevertheless
, there exist more of alternatives to tackle the problem which can
surprisingly
be advantageous if done
properly
.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people say that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for government to make it a legal requirement. v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
352 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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