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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel or to work in a foreign country. Others say that these are the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. v.1

Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel or to work in a foreign country. Others say that these are the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. v. 1
It is unbelievable that most of the people argue that learning a foreign speech is compulsory for the purpose of travel or working in an international provincial. Others opine that apart from to travel or to work and it's a considerable factor to learn foreign values and cultures in their future. I will be discussed with the following reasons. On the one hand, nowadays, most people to choose a foreign country provincial because they want to settle in the future as well as to adapt the education. Moreover, foreign rustic to enhance the various benefits of students as well as other nation's people. For instance, if people have got any job from abroad, there is a tendency to learn a new sound. Moreover, most of the local visitors learn the sound because they have to communicate easily with other people. In addition, if anyone knows the one or more linguistic dialect and it is one of the most superior people and easy to survive in all over the world. On the other hand, other's people believe that not only for leaving a foreign word for the purpose of travel or work and however, it is beneficial to know the values and cultures of foreign nations. Some people prove that to find a different jargon which easily to adopt the rustic and communicate with those people. For example, a recent research proves that in India, 50% of school organisation implement a new sound in the school curriculum activities. Furthermore, everyone should learn a new accent in their future studies. To recapitulate, my opinion is everyone to consider the knowledge of International prose and absorbed the positive aspects of culture and heritage.
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people
argue that learning a
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foreign
speech is compulsory for the purpose of travel or working in an international provincial. Others opine that apart from to travel or to work and it's a considerable factor to
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learn
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foreign
values and cultures in their future. I will
be discussed
with the following reasons.

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people
to choose a
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foreign
country provincial
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because
they want to settle in the future
as well
as to adapt the education.
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,
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foreign
rustic to enhance the various benefits of students
as well
as
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other
nation's
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people
.
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, if
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people
have
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got
any job from abroad, there is a tendency to
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learn
a new sound.
Moreover
, most of the local visitors
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learn
the sound
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because
they
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have to
communicate
easily
with
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other
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people
.
In addition
, if anyone knows the one or more linguistic dialect and it is one of the most superior
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people
and easy to survive in all over the world.

On the
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other
hand, other's
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people
believe that not
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only
for leaving a
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foreign
word for the purpose of travel or work and
however
, it is beneficial to know the values and cultures of
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foreign
nations.
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Some
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people
prove that to find a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
jargon which
easily
to adopt the rustic and communicate with those
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people
.
For example
, a recent research proves that in India, 50% of school
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organisation
implement a new sound in the school curriculum activities.
Furthermore
, everyone should
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learn
a new accent in their future studies.

To recapitulate, my opinion is everyone to consider the knowledge of International prose and absorbed the
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positive
aspects of culture and heritage.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes
If you talk to a man in a language he understands, that goes to his head. If you talk to him in his own language, that goes to his heart.
Nelson Mandela

IELTS essay Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel or to work in a foreign country. Others say that these are the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
280 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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