Education plays the vital role in the development of every country. Therefore It is commonly believed that education system is the only key factor of the country's advancement while others think that not only education, but industries are equally required to step ahead for any country.
Firstly, It is very true that education is one of the chief reasons for the development of the country in each and every field. Giving training to people makes them know what is happening in the country and out of the country. With the help of teaching they come to know about each and every situation like corruption, demerit, and other bad factors running in the nation. For example, in Pakistan people are less educated and they do not know even about the big corruption and their own rights. Hence it is clearly found that those who don't have access to education are blind, which prevents any country becoming developed one.
Secondly, not only education, but industries also has an equal part in any country's development. Industries play key role in the development of any country because having them create lots of jobs in all categories. For example, Bangladesh who has been developing its new industries on rapid rate has a leading economic growth rate in Asia continent. Hence it is proved that along with education, industries in country also help a nation to be in the list of a developed nation.
In conclusion, it would be remarkable to say that education and industries are one of the major key factors of development. Having only education is not necessary, but having equipment to implement that learnt knowledge is important for country's advancement.
Education
plays the vital role in the
development
of every
country
.
Therefore
It is
commonly
believed that
education
system is the
only
key factor of the country's advancement while others
think
that not
only
education
,
but
industries
are
equally
required to step ahead for any country.
Firstly
, It is
very
true that
education
is one of the chief reasons for the
development
of the
country
in each and every field. Giving training to
people
makes
them know what is happening in the
country
and out of the
country
. With the
help
of teaching they
come
to know about each and every situation like corruption, demerit, and other
bad
factors running in the nation.
For example
, in Pakistan
people
are less
educated and
they do not know even about the
big
corruption and their
own
rights.
Hence
it is
clearly
found that those who don't have access to
education
are blind, which
prevents
any
country
becoming developed one.
Secondly
, not
only
education
,
but
industries
also
has an equal part in any country's
development
.
Industries
play key role in the
development
of any
country
because
having them create lots of jobs in all categories.
For example
, Bangladesh who has been developing its new
industries
on rapid rate has a leading economic growth rate in Asia continent.
Hence
it
is proved
that along with
education
,
industries
in
country
also
help
a nation to be in the list of a developed nation.
In conclusion
, it would be remarkable to say that
education
and
industries
are one of the major key factors of
development
. Having
only
education
is not necessary,
but
having equipment to implement that
learnt
knowledge is
important
for country's advancement.
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31Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes