Some would argue that television is beneficial for gaining knowledge, while others say that it is helpful for enjoyment. While some channels provide valuable information, I believe television is more advantageous for leisure.
On the one hand, there are some educational channels which are very useful for children, such as National Geographic and Discovery. These channels provide current information about science, history and wildlife. If children watch such channels, they will have more understanding about the happenings on our planet. For example, in 2011, Canada started a special educational program that focused on Maths which proved to be very helpful for children especially, during their exams. However, I believe that due to the advent of modern technology, children are using the Internet more than television for educational purposes.
On the other hand, television is deemed to be a source of fun and amusement. That is to say, people use television sets only to watch entertaining programs and daily soaps. This is because after a stressful day at work, many people like to listen to music or watch comedy shows just to have a laugh and relax. A survey done last year in India showed that more than 50% of the population used it only to relieve stress by watching movies. I believe that leisure and enjoyment are the main purposes behind watching television.
In conclusion, although television provides educational information which can be beneficial for children, the majority of people watch it for fun and entertainment purposes.
Some
would argue that
television
is beneficial for gaining knowledge, while others say that it is helpful for enjoyment. While
some
channels
provide valuable information, I believe
television
is more advantageous for leisure.
On the one hand, there are
some
educational
channels
which are
very
useful for
children
, such as National Geographic and Discovery. These
channels
provide
current
information about science, history and wildlife. If
children
watch
such
channels
, they will have more understanding about the happenings on our planet.
For example
, in 2011, Canada
started
a special
educational
program that focused on
Maths
which proved to be
very
helpful for
children
especially
, during their exams.
However
, I believe that due to the advent of modern technology,
children
are using the Internet more than
television
for
educational
purposes.
On the other hand
,
television
is deemed
to be a source of fun and amusement.
That is
to say,
people
use
television
sets
only
to
watch
entertaining programs and daily soaps. This is
because
after a stressful day at work,
many
people
like to listen to music or
watch
comedy
shows
just
to have a laugh and relax. A survey done last year in India
showed
that more than 50% of the population
used
it
only
to relieve
stress
by watching movies. I believe that leisure and enjoyment are the main purposes behind watching television.
In conclusion
, although
television
provides
educational
information which can be beneficial for
children
, the majority of
people
watch
it for fun and entertainment purposes.
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