Both quality and appearance are some of the most fundamental things that are needed to work in a company. Some say that the way the employees dress is necessary. While others think performance at work is more important than any other qualifications. In this case, I agree with both points. Either appearance or quality is both significant and no one can stand without another. To illustrate this, I will explain and give some examples in the next paragraph.
First of all, I agree that we can not judge someone based on their looks. However, it is different at work, everyone should dress up nicely. Employees do not need to wear expensive clothes to look smart. When workers meet clients or attend a formal event, the first thing that a company looks at is their images. For instance, if you wear a tank top and shorts at a formal meeting, your co-workers will assume that you are not serious.
On the contrary, performance is also compulsory. You could never survive at an organization if you do not meet their requirements. Every corporation needs someone eligible and has a lot of experience in their jobs. For example, there is a worker that is bad at doing his job. The company thinks that it is useless to employ and will probably fire him.
In conclusion, either looks or performance is important. Without dress up smartly, it would make you perceived inferior by the others. By working with high achievement, the company will be satisfied and could raise your salary. But in the end, it depends on every person as long as they feel enjoy to do their work.
Both quality and appearance are
some
of the most fundamental things that
are needed
to
work
in a
company
.
Some
say that the way the employees dress is necessary.
While
others
think
performance at
work
is more
important
than any other qualifications.
In this case
, I
agree
with both points. Either appearance or quality is both significant and no one can stand without another. To illustrate this, I will
explain
and give
some
examples in the
next
paragraph.
First of all
, I
agree
that we can not judge someone based on their
looks
.
However
, it is
different
at
work
, everyone should dress up
nicely
. Employees do not need to wear expensive clothes to
look
smart. When workers
meet
clients or attend a formal
event
, the
first
thing that a
company
looks
at is their images.
For instance
, if you wear a tank top and shorts at a formal meeting, your co-workers will assume that you are not serious.
On the contrary
, performance is
also
compulsory. You could never survive at an organization if you do not
meet
their requirements. Every corporation needs someone eligible and has
a lot of
experience in their jobs.
For example
, there is a worker
that is
bad
at doing his job. The
company
thinks
that it is useless to employ and will
probably
fire him.
In conclusion
, either
looks
or performance is
important
. Without dress up
smartly
, it would
make
you perceived inferior by the others. By working with high achievement, the
company
will
be satisfied
and could raise your salary.
But
in the
end
, it depends on every person as long as they feel
enjoy to do
their
work
.
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