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Some people say that public libraries should be free, otherwise they are just a waste of money, especially because modern technologies and the internet allow easy access to resources. v.1

Some people say that public libraries should be free, otherwise they are just a waste of money, especially because modern technologies and the internet allow easy access to resources. v. 1
Some people believe that library should be made available to the public without entrance fee because new arising modern technology and internet access can already provide information resources. Nonetheless, most people will no longer visit the library. However, others argue that it should have an entrance and membership fee. We can never deny those people who believe that library should impose entrance and membership fees to the public. The funds are needed for the maintenance of the facilities and purchasing of new books. Library is still important because it is a quiet place where people can read the books peacefully. Nowadays, there are various web pages on the internet that can provide similar information as in the library. Nevertheless, the convenience of the place is much more calming for the reader. The reader cannot concentrate on reading information on computer shop because of the noise from other users. It is widely true that information from the internet has several adverts, and it interrupts on comprehending the information. Therefore, the library is still important for the readers. It does not rely on electricity. It is conventional and boundless. There is not health and mental hazards on reading in the library that might happen due to excessive use of a computer. However, some people point out that library should be free to users. It is widely believed that the aim of good governance is to educate certain people in the society. Public libraries should be made free and accessible to the majority of people. There are certain groups of people who want to acquire information; nonetheless, they are restricted because of the fine imposed in the library. For instance, the impoverished group is not given the opportunity to finish their studies. As a result, if the library can only be free to the public, therefore the impoverished can acquire simple knowledge despite the lack of education at school. They cannot be displaced to other social economic group because they have knowledge that is comparable to educated ones. The information in the public library is vast. It has resources that are being taught at the school. The free entrance of public library is beneficial in displacing people from ignorance. Overall, in my opinion, libraries should be free for all because it will help the community to become successful if most people are inclined in reading instead of being astray such as drinking or committing crimes. The community will develop if the majority of people are knowledgeable.
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Some
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people
believe that library should
be made
available to the
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public
without
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entrance
fee
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because
new arising modern technology and internet access can already provide
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information
resources. Nonetheless, most
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people
will no longer visit the library.
However
, others argue that it should have an
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
entrance
and membership fee.

We can never deny those
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
who believe that library should impose
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
entrance
and membership fees to the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
public
. The funds
are needed
for the maintenance of the facilities and purchasing of new books. Library is
still
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
it is a quiet place where
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
can read the books
peacefully
. Nowadays, there are various web pages on the internet that can provide similar
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
as in the library.
Nevertheless
, the convenience of the place is much more calming for the reader. The reader cannot concentrate on reading
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
on computer shop
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of the noise from other users. It is
widely
true that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
from the internet has several adverts, and it interrupts on comprehending the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
.
Therefore
, the library is
still
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
for the readers. It does not rely on electricity. It is conventional and boundless. There is not health and mental hazards on reading in the library that might happen due to excessive
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
of a computer.

However
,
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some
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people
point out that library should be
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
free
to users. It is
widely
believed that the aim of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
governance is to educate certain
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
in the society.
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Public
libraries should
be made
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
free
and accessible to the majority of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
. There are certain groups of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
who want to acquire
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
; nonetheless, they
are restricted
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of the fine imposed in the library.
For instance
, the impoverished group is not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
the opportunity to finish their studies.
As a result
, if the library can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
be
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
free
to the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
public
,
therefore
the impoverished can acquire simple knowledge despite the lack of education at school. They cannot
be displaced
to other social economic group
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
they have knowledge
that is
comparable to educated ones. The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
public
library is vast. It has resources that are
being taught
at the school. The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
free
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
entrance
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
public
library is beneficial in displacing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
from ignorance.

Overall
, in my opinion, libraries should be
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
free
for all
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
it will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
the community to become successful if most
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
are inclined
in reading
instead
of being astray such as drinking or committing crimes. The community will develop if the majority of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
are knowledgeable.
14Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
33Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Some people say that public libraries should be free, otherwise they are just a waste of money, especially because modern technologies and the internet allow easy access to resources. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
413 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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