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Some people say that public libraries are an important public resource and should be free. Others say that they are just a waste of public money. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. v.2

Some people say that public libraries are an important public resource and should be free. Others say that they are just a waste of public money. v. 2
While it is argued that public libraries are an essential asset for societies and their services should be provided free of charge, others argue that these institutions are a burden on taxpayers. In this essay I will defend both sides of the argument, and then I will show my own perspective. On the one hand, some people argue that public libraries help society members to acquire knowledge easily. In addition to that, these institutions act as an archive for all kinds of information, especially local achievements which motivate society members to get better education and aspire to further success. Consequently, these libraries should continue to benefit from public funds and ought to be accessible to all community members without entrance fees. For example, numerous studies have concluded that, nations which have more free public libraries per capita obtained higher education levels and scientific achievements per inhabitant than countries with fewer public libraries. On the other hand, other people argue that the modern technological advancements could provide other educational resources without wasting the government's money. Resources like public internet access could achieve the same level of benefits while costing much less. Moreover, spending the excess money to improve other public facilities like schools and parks, could prove to be more beneficial for societies. Hence, some people think that it is possible to minimize public spending on libraries without compromizing the education quality. In conclusion, while some people think that we should spend less money on public libraries and look for technological solutions to maintain the same benefits, others argue that public libraries are still important to societies on many levels, especially when it comes to highlighting local achievements. In my opinion, public libraries are an essential part of any society, and their benefits could not be compensated in other ways.
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is argued
that
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libraries are an essential asset for
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societies
and their services should
be provided
free of charge, others
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argue
that these institutions are a burden on taxpayers. In this essay I will defend both sides of the argument, and then I will
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own
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some
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people
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that
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public
libraries
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help
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society
members to acquire knowledge
easily
.
In addition
to that, these institutions act as an archive for all kinds of information,
especially
local achievements which motivate
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society
members to
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get
better education and aspire to
further
success.
Consequently
, these libraries should continue to
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benefit
from
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public
funds and ought to be accessible to all community members without entrance fees.
For example
, numerous studies have concluded that, nations which have more free
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public
libraries per capita obtained higher education levels and scientific achievements per inhabitant than countries with fewer
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public
libraries.

On the
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other
hand,
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other
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people
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argue
that the modern technological advancements could provide
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other
educational resources without wasting the
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government
's money. Resources like
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public
internet access could achieve the same level of
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benefits
while costing much less.
Moreover
, spending the excess money to
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improve
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other
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public
facilities like schools and parks, could prove to be more beneficial for
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societies
.
Hence
,
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some
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people
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think
that it is possible to minimize
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public
spending on libraries without
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compromizing
the education quality.

In conclusion
, while
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some
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people
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think
that we should spend less money on
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public
libraries and look for technological solutions to maintain the same
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benefits
, others
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argue
that
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public
libraries are
still
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important
to
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societies
on
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many
levels,
especially
when it
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comes
to highlighting local achievements. In my opinion,
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public
libraries are an essential part of any
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society
, and their
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benefits
could not
be compensated
in
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other
ways.
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IELTS essay Some people say that public libraries are an important public resource and should be free. Others say that they are just a waste of public money. v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
299 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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