Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Some people believe that history is very important and we must study the past to understand the present. Others say that it has little or no use at all. v.1

Some people believe that history is very important and we must study the past to understand the present. Others say that it has little or no use at all. v. 1
Perhaps no subject in the world causes as much controversy as history does. In recent years, there has been a growing attitude toward understanding history which is to the largest extent beneficial for people of all walks of life. However, there is a view that argues against this and considers no roles for history. In this essay, I will look at both aspects and put forward my observation. It is obvious that past experience plays a vital role in every facet of human's life. Since our past experience has been tried, we are more likely to be successful in the long run. The better and successful plan is, therefore, offered. From an educational perspective, for example, many people have obtained their qualifications through numerous methods which now they completely obsolete and other innovative means of education have been replaced. In this regard, by looking at previous decades we are more willing to benefit from past experience so as to gain prosperity and make an excellent plan for our future. On the flip side, despite the fact that looking at history is essential to get inspiration for advancement in life, we should not overlook the sight of the fact that this might be time and money consuming. We are living in a fast-growing world and planning as well as thinking about future is the most beneficial act that we should be able to carry out. As an example, in urban planning, it is totally waste of time if history is taken into account. In addition, many materials which used in past buildings are out of access. Thus, understanding historical building cannot help to make new buildings. As suggested above, although a few number of people believe that history is not as necessary as other issues, I agree that understanding it has manifold positive effects on our life.
Perhaps no subject in the world causes as much controversy as
history
does. In recent years, there has been a growing attitude toward understanding
history
which is to the largest extent beneficial for
people
of all walks of
life
.
However
, there is a view that argues against this and considers no roles for
history
. In this essay, I will look at both aspects and put forward my observation.

It is obvious that
past experience
plays a vital role in every facet of human's
life
. Since our
past experience
has
been tried
, we are more likely to be successful in the long run. The better and successful plan is,
therefore
, offered. From an educational perspective,
for example
,
many
people
have obtained their qualifications through numerous methods which
now
they completely obsolete and other innovative means of education have
been replaced
. In this regard, by looking at previous decades we are more willing to benefit from
past experience
so as to
gain prosperity and
make
an excellent plan for our future.

On the flip side, despite the fact that looking at
history
is essential to
get
inspiration for advancement in
life
, we should not overlook the sight of the fact that this might be time and money consuming. We are living in a
fast
-growing world and planning
as well
as thinking about future is the most beneficial act that we should be able to carry out. As an example, in urban planning, it is
totally
waste of time if
history
is taken
into account.
In addition
,
many
materials which
used
in
past
buildings are out of access.
Thus
, understanding historical building cannot
help
to
make
new buildings.

As suggested above, although a
few number
of
people
believe that
history
is not as necessary as other issues, I
agree
that understanding it has manifold
positive
effects on our
life
.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
14Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people believe that history is very important and we must study the past to understand the present. Others say that it has little or no use at all. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
306 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Similar posts