Some people say that physical education classes are an important part of a child’s education. Others believe that it is more important to focus on academics during school time. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. v.1
Some people say that physical education classes are an important part of a child’s education. Others believe that it is more important to focus on academics during school time. v. 1
The majority of schools devote most of the school day to academic classes, but also set aside time for physical education and other no academic classes. However, not everyone agrees with this way of dividing up the school day. While there are people who think that schools should only be about academics, others believe that physical education is also important, and I agree with this point of view.
Some people feel that school should be all about academics. According to this point of view, children need to spend their entire school day learning math, science, literature, and history. Devoting time to these subjects is the best way to prepare children for their future university education and careers. If children enjoy playing sports, they should do it outside of school time.
Other people, however, feel that physical education is an important part of a child’s education. According to this point of view, physical education teaches children important skills such as teamwork, leadership, and how to win and lose gracefully. In addition, physical activity classes are the best way to ensure that children get the regular physical exercise that they need to stay healthy. Finally, if children spend a little time each day being physically active, it helps them concentrate better on their academic work.
I agree that devoting some school time to physical exercise is necessary. If schools don’t give importance to physical education, children will not learn that physical activity is important. They won’t get the exercise that they need to grow up healthy. It is not enough to say they can play games and sports in their free time. They won’t choose to do these things if no one teaches them that they are important.
Academics are important, but physical education is important, too. Schools need to prepare children for all aspects of life, including taking care of their physical health.
The majority of
schools
devote most of the
school
day to
academic
classes,
but
also
set aside
time
for
physical
education
and other no
academic
classes.
However
, not everyone
agrees
with this way of dividing up the
school
day. While there are
people
who
think
that
schools
should
only
be about
academics
, others believe that
physical
education
is
also
important
, and I
agree
with this point of view.
Some
people
feel that
school
should be all about
academics
. According to this point of view,
children
need
to spend their entire
school
day learning math, science, literature, and history. Devoting
time
to these subjects is the best way to prepare
children
for their future university
education
and careers. If
children
enjoy playing sports, they should do it outside of
school
time.
Other
people
,
however
, feel that
physical
education
is an
important
part of a child’s
education
. According to this point of view,
physical
education
teaches
children
important
skills
such as teamwork, leadership, and how to win and lose
gracefully
.
In addition
,
physical
activity classes are the best way to ensure that
children
get
the regular
physical
exercise that they
need
to stay healthy.
Finally
, if
children
spend a
little
time
each day being
physically
active, it
helps
them concentrate better on their
academic
work.
I
agree
that devoting
some
school
time
to
physical
exercise is necessary. If
schools
don’t give importance to
physical
education
,
children
will not learn that
physical
activity is
important
. They won’t
get
the exercise that they
need
to grow up healthy. It is not
enough
to say they can play games and sports in their free
time
. They won’t choose to do these things if no one teaches them that they are
important
.
Academics are
important
,
but
physical
education
is
important
, too.
Schools
need
to prepare
children
for all aspects of life, including taking care of their
physical
health.
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