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Some people think that you can never become fluent in a language unless you have spent time living or working in that country. To what extend do you agree? v.1

Some people think that you can never become fluent in a language unless you have spent time living or working in that country. v. 1
Learning a new language from text books and applying grammar rules, which are the essence of learning any language, but not necessarily enough. Using the language with native speaker is what ensures language fluency. I strongly concur with the need of extensive period of the language use in context. To start with, using the language is a skill you can acquire, which is crucial to understand the cultural aspect of a country, but it is not enough without living a couple of month and use it with locals. For instance, in Italy, people there use their non-verbal to express themselves. Although you will be using the appropriate verbs or sentence structure, but not enough to fluently speak the Italian language without using hand gestures. Therefore, living and communicating with citizens is essential to have a natural flow of language. Another reason for the need of use the language in the original country over a period of time, which gives the opportunity to use the correct terminologies in context, permit gaining fluency. To illustrate this, being able to use the language to purchase your daily products or using it in professional setting by using the appropriate word aids in verbal fluency. Thus socializing on daily basis allows better acquisition of verbal communication. In conclusion, I strongly agree that culture builds an excellent language use that is better than that taken from any course. Living in a region that use that language you will know and understand how people use their native language in their daily life. Moreover, using the correct word in context while daily communication a key to ensure language fluency.
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language
,
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but
not
necessarily
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enough
. Using the
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language
with native speaker is what ensures
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language
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fluency
. I
strongly
concur with the need of extensive period of the
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language
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use
in context.

To
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start
with, using the
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language
is a
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skill
you can acquire, which is crucial to understand the cultural aspect of a country,
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but
it is not
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enough
without living
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and
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it with locals.
For instance
, in Italy,
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people
there
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use
their non-verbal to express themselves. Although you will be using the appropriate verbs or sentence structure,
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but
not
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enough
to
fluently
speak the Italian
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language
without using hand gestures.
Therefore
, living and communicating with citizens is essential to have a natural flow of language.

Another reason for the need of
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use
the
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language
in the original country over a period of time, which gives the opportunity to
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use
the correct terminologies in context, permit gaining
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fluency
. To illustrate this, being able to
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use
the
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language
to
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purchase
your
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daily
products or using it in professional setting by using the appropriate word aids in verbal
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fluency
.
Thus
socializing on
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daily
basis
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allows
better acquisition of verbal communication.

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, I
strongly
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agree
that culture builds an excellent
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language
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use
that is
better than that taken from any course. Living in a region that
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use
that
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language
you will know and understand how
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people
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use
their native
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language
in their
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daily
life.
Moreover
, using the correct word in context while
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daily
communication a key to ensure
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language
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fluency
.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
21Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes
Learning another language is not only learning different words for the same things, but learning another way to think about things.
Flora Lewis

IELTS essay Some people think that you can never become fluent in a language unless you have spent time living or working in that country. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
271 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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