Some people say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organised group activities in their free time. Others say that it is important for children to learn how to occupy themselves on their own. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. v.15
Some people say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organised group activities in their free time. Others say that it is important for children to learn how to occupy themselves on their own. v. 15
It is rightly said: "An empty mind is a devil's workshop". In the same context, while some deem that learning ways to keep themselves occupied is imperative for children, there are others who believe that parents should be the motivating factor for their children to participate in planned team activities. In my judgement, it is indeed beneficial when parents are involved with their children to make such decisions, rather than allowing children individually decide upon the means to be occupied.
To begin with, some consider that children should have or learn to have a perspective on things; often this is viewed as an important skill-building. As a result, emphasis on the knowledge of ways to be individually engaged in activities is made, for children. For instance, in the US, children are taught to be independent and self-engaged in some or the other activity that interests them. This cultivates self-dependence, as well as provide ample opportunities to explore and settle for what is suitable and which interests them.
In contrast to this, not all children are well-versed with ways to be involved, in relation to group activities. In this case, the parents' involvement greatly encourages their children not only to choose the right activity, but also to learn the significance of working in a team. For example, in many countries children are enrolled in summer camps and other group events, during their school holidays, where they are taught essential skills like: building self-confidence, team-work and behavioural etiquettes. Therefore, in these events involving a group, children are being taught the most crucial life-lessons.
To conclude, it is considered by many that children ought to individually understand ways to be self-occupied; however, their parents' motivation is necessary when opting for group activities during leisure time.
It is
rightly
said:
"
An empty mind is a devil's workshop
"
. In the same context, while
some
deem that learning
ways
to
keep
themselves occupied is imperative for
children
, there are others who believe that parents should be the motivating factor for their
children
to participate in planned team
activities
. In my judgement, it is
indeed
beneficial when parents
are involved
with their
children
to
make
such decisions,
rather
than allowing
children
individually
decide upon the means to
be occupied
.
To
begin
with,
some
consider that
children
should have or learn to have a perspective on things;
often
this
is viewed
as an
important
skill
-building.
As a result
, emphasis on the knowledge of
ways
to be
individually
engaged in
activities
is made
, for
children
.
For instance
, in the US,
children
are taught
to be independent and self-engaged in
some
or the other
activity
that interests them. This cultivates self-dependence,
as well
as provide ample opportunities to explore and settle for what is suitable and which interests them.
In contrast
to this, not all
children
are well-versed with
ways
to
be involved
, in relation to
group
activities
.
In this case
, the parents' involvement
greatly
encourages their
children
not
only
to choose the right
activity
,
but
also
to learn the significance of working in a team.
For example
, in
many
countries
children
are enrolled
in summer camps and other
group
events
, during their school holidays, where they
are taught
essential
skills
like: building self-confidence, team-work and
behavioural
etiquettes
.
Therefore
, in these
events
involving a
group
,
children
are
being taught
the most crucial life-lessons.
To conclude
, it
is considered
by
many
that
children
ought to
individually
understand
ways
to be self-occupied;
however
, their parents' motivation is necessary when opting for
group
activities
during leisure time.
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