A child’s mind is like a piece of clay that can be moulded into any desirable form. Leisure time is a great opportunity for children to acquire useful skills and to entertain themselves. Perhaps due to this, some parents are encouraging organised activities for children while others believe in letting their children occupy themselves in their own way. I feel that children’s participation in team building activities would keep them fruitfully engaged. It will also prepare them for handling multiple endeavours in the future.
Playing regular sports such as cricket, football, and badminton or attending art classes to learn musical instruments, singing, and dancing sounds productive. Children busy with these scheduled pastimes would be less prone to spend long hours on TV, phones or the internet. Additionally, they might discover their passion while pursuing these arranged activities.
On the other side, some people would like to leave it up to the children to follow their interests. A free and non-coercive environment could foster creative abilities in children. For example, activities such as building a castle in the sand or crafting a prototype of a bus, train or animals foster creativity in children. Moreover, the instructive nature of sorted sessions may not interest everyone and leave them with minimal or no time for relaxation.
In my opinion, I feel children should be motivated to pursue systemized undertakings in their idle time. However, they should be spared some time to ponder and tinker with things around and nurture their own hobbies. It should possibly be under careful guidance.
A child’s mind is like a piece of clay that can be
moulded
into any desirable form. Leisure
time
is a great opportunity for
children
to acquire useful
skills
and to entertain themselves. Perhaps due to this,
some
parents are encouraging
organised
activities for
children
while others believe in letting their
children
occupy themselves in their
own
way. I feel that
children’s
participation in team building activities would
keep
them
fruitfully
engaged. It will
also
prepare them for handling multiple
endeavours
in the future.
Playing regular sports such as cricket, football, and badminton or attending art classes to learn musical instruments, singing, and dancing sounds productive.
Children
busy with these scheduled pastimes would be less prone to spend long hours on TV, phones or the internet.
Additionally
, they might discover their passion while pursuing these arranged activities.
On the other side,
some
people
would like to
leave
it up to the
children
to follow their interests. A free and non-coercive environment could foster creative abilities in
children
.
For example
, activities such as building a castle in the sand or crafting a prototype of a bus, train or animals foster creativity in
children
.
Moreover
, the instructive nature of sorted sessions may not interest everyone and
leave
them with minimal or no
time
for relaxation.
In my opinion, I feel
children
should
be motivated
to pursue systemized undertakings in their idle
time
.
However
, they should
be spared
some
time
to ponder and tinker with things around and nurture their
own
hobbies. It should
possibly
be under careful guidance.
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13Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes