Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for government to make it a legal requirement. To what extend do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste. v.21

some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for government to make it a legal requirement. v. 21
It is upheld by a few people that a lot of garbage produced in houses are not being recycled and it is also said that the best method to solve this problem is that authorities should make laws, so that maximum amount of waste can be recycled. I personally think that the reason for the residue being not recycled properly is the amount of awareness in the citizen. Therefore, instead of making laws, the government should inform people how to reuse them. Although, the laws help the population maintain a clean environment, but they exactly do not know a proper way to use them. Consequently, even after implying strict rules some rich people will not follow them because they do not understand its benefit. For instance, there are some wealthy people in my neighbourhood those who not even care to recycle the goods, but on the other hand, there are some of them those make art of their wastes. Additionally, some people want to usually change their furniture or their appliances with a new one and want to sell their items, but there are not enough places where they can do so. For example, last month, When I bought a new sofa and still the old one was in a useable condition, but however, I did not know enough people to whom I can give my old sofa, which results leaves no option for me I had to through it. In conclusion, even though the new laws will force people to recycle their goods, but it will not be an ultimate solution because very few people know the appropriate way to recycle and moreover, they also have no idea where to recycle their items.
It
is upheld
by a few
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
that
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
a lot of
garbage produced in
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
houses
are not
being recycled
and it is
also
said that the best method to solve this problem is that authorities should
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
laws
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that maximum amount of waste can
be recycled
. I
personally
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
that the reason for the residue being not recycled
properly
is the amount of awareness in the citizen.
Therefore
,
instead
of making
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
laws
, the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
should inform
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
how to reuse them.

Although, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
laws
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
the population maintain a clean environment,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
they exactly do not know a proper way to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
them.
Consequently
, even after implying strict
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
rules
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
rich
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
will not follow them
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
they do not understand its benefit.
For instance
, there are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
wealthy
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
in my
Possible spelling mistake. 'neighbourhood' is British English.
neighbourhood
those who not even care to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycle
the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
goods
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
on the other hand
, there are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
of them those
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
art of their wastes.

Additionally
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
want to
usually
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
their furniture or their appliances with a new one and want to sell their items,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
there are not
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
enough
places where they can do
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
.
For example
, last month, When I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bought
a new sofa and
still
the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
old
one was in
Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
a
useable condition,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
however
, I did not know
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
enough
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
to whom I can give my
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
old
sofa, which results
Possible agreement error. You should probably use: "leave".
leaves
no option for me I had to through it.

In conclusion
,
even though
the new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
laws
will force
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycle
their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
goods
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
it will not be an ultimate solution
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
few
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
know the appropriate way to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycle
and
moreover
, they
also
have no
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
idea
where to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycle
their items.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for government to make it a legal requirement. v. 21

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
284 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Similar posts


Recent posts