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Some people claim that enough of waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for government to make it legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste? v.1

Some people claim that enough of waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for government to make it legal requirement. v. 1
Nowadays, Waste management is a burning issue around the globe. Some commentators say that governments should make strict laws to protect the environment and to increase in the ratio of recycling wastes from households. However, I partly agree laws are needed and in the same time, public awareness regarding benefits of recycling required which could bring phenomenal impact. On one hand, laws should be made for protecting earth from waste damage and some commentators believe it is the only way to increase recycling by stating following suggestions. Firstly, the government should make policies regarding packaging materials used by industries for undamaged dispatching. In addition to this, replacing those of non-recycle packers with reusable and recyclable materials could decrease plastics significantly, in turn, it allows people to use and exchange wastes at a recycling plant. For instance, now coco-cola company uses reusable bottles and aluminum tins. Secondly, laws should make compulsory circulation of biodegradable bags and violation of law by any shopping malls or grocery stores should be imposed with a huge penalty. Lastly, Establishment of recycling units in cities and collection, and separation of garbage into degradable, non-degradable, and hazardous wastes, and then it is transported to recycling units. On the other hand, some people think that making laws are not sufficient and cannot do all the work. So that, the government should also focus on campaigning and advertising which could create public awareness about benefits of recycling and potential damages of non-recyclable materials. For example, people in developed nations divide their garbage into degradable, non-degradable, and hazardous wastes and then discharged to waste management units through garbage collectors. Moreover, many countries like Thailand, Japan, and so on following 3R campaign, this means reduce, reuse, and recycle, giving immense publicity for environment safety. To conclude, strict polices are not sufficient for increase of recycling wastes from households. However, there is need of public awareness about recycling benefits. With the help of both government and public, recycling of wastes could be efficient.
Nowadays,
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Waste
management is a burning issue around the globe.
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Some
commentators say that
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governments
should
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make
strict
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laws
to protect the environment and to increase in the ratio of
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recycling
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
wastes
from households.
However
, I partly
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agree
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laws
are needed
and in the same time,
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public
awareness regarding benefits of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycling
required which could bring phenomenal impact.

On one hand,
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laws
should
be made
for protecting earth from
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waste
damage and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
commentators believe it is the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
way to increase
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recycling
by stating following suggestions.
Firstly
, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
government
should
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
policies regarding packaging materials
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
by industries for undamaged dispatching.
In addition
to this, replacing those of non-recycle packers with reusable and recyclable materials could decrease plastics
significantly
, in turn, it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
allows
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
and exchange
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wastes
at a
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recycling
plant.
For instance
,
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now
coco-cola
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company
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uses
reusable bottles and aluminum tins.
Secondly
,
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laws
should
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
compulsory circulation of biodegradable bags and violation of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
law
by any shopping malls or grocery stores should
be imposed
with a huge penalty.
Lastly
, Establishment of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycling
units in cities and collection, and separation of garbage into degradable, non-degradable, and hazardous
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wastes
, and then it
is transported
to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycling
units.

On the other hand
,
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some
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people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
that making
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laws
are not sufficient and cannot do all the work.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
that, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
government
should
also
focus on campaigning and advertising which could create
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
public
awareness about benefits of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycling
and potential damages of non-recyclable materials.
For example
,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
in developed nations divide their garbage into degradable, non-degradable, and hazardous
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
wastes
and then discharged to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
management units through garbage collectors.
Moreover
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
countries like Thailand, Japan, and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
on following 3R campaign, this means
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduce
, reuse, and recycle, giving immense publicity for environment safety.

To conclude
, strict polices are not sufficient for increase of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycling
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
wastes
from households.
However
, there
is need
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
public
awareness about
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycling
benefits. With the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
of both
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government
and
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public
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycling
of
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wastes
could be efficient.
12Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
33Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes
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IELTS essay Some people claim that enough of waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for government to make it legal requirement. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
331 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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