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Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary school to universities, too much time spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills. Do you agree or disagree? v.1

Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary school to universities, too much time spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills. v. 1
Nowadays, flooding is a cause of widespread concern today, as so many developed countries are affected this disaster repeatedly. Flood is a natural disaster that involves overflowing of rainwater over a region of land that is dry under usual conditions. There are several causes, and crucial impacts, which I will outline in this essay now. The causes of floods can occur naturally and unnaturally caused due to human activities, when there are heavy rains can cause an overflow of water from water bodies. Also, natural calamities like earthquakes cause Tsunami in the oceans, which leads to flooding of lands close to beaches. In heavily populated cities, due to congested buildings and roadways, flooding happens as there is not enough room for water to drain. In such cases clogged drainages lead to even more flooding of the area. In addition, global warming has resulted in the melting of glaciers which increase water levels of rivers and flooding of river banks. In such cases clogged drainages lead to even more flooding of the area. As well deforestation also plays a major role in the flooding. Regarding the effects felt by this flooding disaster, floods cause large-scale loss of life and great damage to properties. Floods motive severe damage to agricultural regions of the affected area, vast acres of crops are destroyed, there is loss of life of humans as well as animals. The residents and the government both suffer from fall in financial terms. Rebuilding of affected areas takes a lot of time and money. To sum up, the causes of this trend are primarily to do with natural and unnatural phenomenon due to human activities, and the crucial effects are felt in terms of large-scale loss of life and spend a lot of money to restore the original circumstance.
Nowadays,
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flooding
is a
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cause
of widespread concern
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many
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developed countries
are
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affected
this disaster
repeatedly
.
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Flood
is a natural disaster that involves overflowing of rainwater over a region of land
that is
dry under usual conditions. There are several
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causes
, and crucial impacts, which I will outline in this essay
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now
.

The
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causes
of
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floods
can occur
naturally
and
unnaturally
caused due to human activities, when there are heavy rains can
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cause
an overflow of
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water
from
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water
bodies.
Also
, natural calamities like earthquakes
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cause
Tsunami in the oceans, which leads to
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flooding
of lands close to beaches. In
heavily
populated cities, due to congested buildings and roadways,
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flooding
happens as there is not
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enough
room for
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water
to drain. In such cases clogged drainages lead to even more
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flooding
of the
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area
.
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In
addition, global warming has resulted in the melting of glaciers which increase
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water
levels of rivers and
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flooding
of river banks.
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In
such cases clogged drainages lead to even more
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flooding
of the
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area
.
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As
well deforestation
also
plays a major role in the flooding.

Regarding the effects felt by this
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flooding
disaster,
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floods
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cause
large-scale loss of life and great damage to properties.
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Floods
motive severe damage to agricultural regions of the
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affected
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area
, vast acres of crops are
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destroyed
, there is loss of life of humans
as well
as animals. The residents and the
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government
both suffer from fall in financial terms. Rebuilding of
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affected
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areas
takes
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a lot of
time and money.

To sum up, the
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causes
of this trend are
primarily
to do with natural and unnatural phenomenon due to human activities, and the crucial effects
are felt
in terms of large-scale loss of life and spend
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a lot of
money to restore the original circumstance.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes
Language comes first. It’s not that language grows out of consciousness, if you haven’t got language, you can’t be conscious.
Alan Moore

IELTS essay Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary school to universities, too much time spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
298 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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