Universities should spend more money on improving facilities like library computer labs than on hiring famous teachers v.1
Universities should spend more money on improving facilities like library computer labs than on hiring famous teachers v. 1
Some argue that competitive attitude in children should be facilitated, while others claim that learning them how to co-operate with their peers would make them better adults. In my view, this is a sensitive issue to discuss, but I would prefer to have a competitive and a cooperative child, as the combination of these two characters will add to the child significantly.
Firstly, competing with your classmates will enhance your performance intellectually and physically. For example, having a class of students full of motivation, and the desire to score full marks, will lead to a better atmosphere in the class, and increases the level of education. Similarly, when it comes to sports, competitive attitude is crucial to reach fame and success.
On the other hand, raising children with the spirit of co-operation and giving a hand to the needy ones will create a society full of charity. Also, it will decrease the number of crimes in that community. Teaching children how to deal with poor, injured, and handicapped people is an act of humanity. Conversely, a society full of selfish, greedy, and power-loving individuals will lead to moral collapse and a lot of social problems.
Therefore, in my point of view, it is better to teach our children how to treat others rightly. Moreover, raising a young competitive generation will develop the society, and increase levels of literacy. Eventually, these two results will yield economic growth, and financial benefits.
In conclusion, children should be taught how to be successful in their lives. Raising children with good characters like helping others, and competing with others in different fields will put them on the right path for success and prosperity.
Some
argue that
competitive
attitude in
children
should
be facilitated
, while others claim that learning them how to co-operate with their peers would
make
them better adults. In my view, this is a sensitive issue to discuss,
but
I would prefer to have a
competitive
and a cooperative child, as the combination of these two characters will
add
to the child
significantly
.
Firstly
, competing with your classmates will enhance your performance
intellectually
and
physically
.
For example
, having a
class
of students
full
of motivation, and the desire to score
full
marks, will lead to a better atmosphere in the
class
, and increases the level of education.
Similarly
, when it
comes
to sports,
competitive
attitude is crucial to reach fame and success.
On the
other
hand, raising
children
with the spirit of co-operation and giving a hand to the needy ones will create a society
full
of charity.
Also
, it will decrease the number of crimes in that community. Teaching
children
how to deal with poor, injured, and handicapped
people
is
an act of humanity.
Conversely
, a society
full
of selfish, greedy, and power-loving individuals will lead to moral collapse and
a lot of
social problems.
Therefore
, in my point of view, it is better to teach our
children
how to treat others
rightly
.
Moreover
, raising a young
competitive
generation will develop the society, and increase levels of literacy.
Eventually
, these two results will yield economic growth, and financial benefits.
In conclusion
,
children
should
be taught
how to be successful in their
lives
. Raising
children
with
good
characters like helping others, and competing with others in
different
fields will put them on the right path for success and prosperity.
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