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Some people say that e-boos and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspapers and magazines. To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.2

Technology is assisting humans in various fields in the modern world. Due to the growing trend of technology, few of the opinions consider that conventional way of reading newspapers and magazines will disappear as the eBooks and videos will take its place. Considering my opinion, I firmly stand with the assumptions and discussing in further paragraphs. Analyzing the former viewpoint, the use of technology has a positive trend over the past few years and humans are getting more dependent and addicted towards the automation. Technology has affected the young generation more and in the speedy world they do not like to read newspapers and magazines early in the morning. To keep themselves updated they simply scroll down the phone screen and catch up with all the latest news on different applications. The newspapers, magazines or articles gets wet in rainy season or in the winters due to snow or by accidently water gets spread on that, then it is extremely difficult to read. However, eBooks and videos are stored in the mobile phones so it is convenient to keep ourselves updated. Moving further, the eBooks and videos have more reliable and detailed information then print media which includes newspapers, magazines and articles. The visualization effects in videos encourages many people towards the electronic media and along with youngsters the other generation is also moving to the electronic media. Research and studies became easy, rather than the meaning of a word in dictionary now they can easily find out on applications. However, it is evident that the old-aged people are always curious of reading newspapers and attachments in the morning with a cup of tea. Many people have reading habits so they’re more inclined towards traditional way of reading newspapers. Newspapers are easiest and cheapest way of keeping ourselves updated with the world. The tradition of reading attachments are followed since the print media was introduced. To sum it up, traditional ways are easiest and oldest source of getting information however, people are getting attach with technology and as a result conventional ways of getting information started depleting.
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, few of the opinions consider that conventional
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eBooks
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will take its place. Considering my opinion, I
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Analyzing the former viewpoint, the
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technology
has a
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positive
trend over the past few years and humans are getting more dependent and addicted towards the automation.
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Technology
has
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affected
the young generation more and in the speedy world they do not like to read
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newspapers
and
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magazines
early in the morning. To
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keep
themselves updated they
simply
scroll down the phone screen and catch up with all the latest news on
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different
applications. The
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newspapers
,
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magazines
or articles
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gets
wet in rainy season or in the winters due to snow or by
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accidently
water
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gets
spread on that, then it is
extremely
difficult to read.
However
,
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eBooks
and
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videos
are stored
in the mobile phones
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so
it is convenient to
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keep
ourselves updated.

Moving
further
, the
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eBooks
and
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videos
have more reliable and detailed information
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then
print
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media
which includes
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newspapers
,
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magazines
and articles. The visualization effects in
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videos
encourages
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many
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people
towards the electronic
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media
and along with youngsters the other generation is
also
moving to the electronic
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media
. Research and studies became easy,
rather
than the meaning of a word in dictionary
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now
they can
easily
find out on applications.

However
, it is evident that the
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old
-aged
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people
are always curious of
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reading
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newspapers
and attachments in the morning with a cup of tea.
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have
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habits
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they’re more inclined towards traditional
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of
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reading
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newspapers
.
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Newspapers
are easiest and cheapest
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way
of keeping ourselves updated with the world. The tradition of
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reading
attachments
are followed
since the print
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media
was introduced
.

To sum it up, traditional
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ways
are easiest and oldest source of getting information
however
,
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people
are getting attach with
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technology
and
as a result
conventional
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ways
of getting information
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started
depleting.
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IELTS essay Some people say that eBooks and modern technology will totally replace the traditional newspapers and magazines.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
347 words
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