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Some people say that E-books and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspaper and magazines. To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.1

Some people say that E-books and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspaper and magazines. v. 1
Our life is surrounded by numerous types of technological devices that some of them use are using to catch information. By emerging digital books and the websites of news and science, some people believe that technology will completely cause them to disappear print out books. I would agree that the number of printed books will decrease significantly in the future, but I do believe that paper-based books will never be replaced totally. The number of people who use E-books and computers for reading, increase dramatically in the last decades. Perhaps the main reason why reading news and books on the internet are becoming the first priority for some people is that, people can read the latest news at the moment so they are still updated. Besides, they can access the content of the articles and books easily. Take some researchers as an example, sometimes they should find a specific sentence in the book, it is clear that browsing through the E-books for finding this word is more convenient than paper-based books. Although the use of digital books is becoming more popular, the importance of traditional books and magazines should not be ignored. It is considered that the radiation of the computer screen would cause eye irritation, and give a negative effect on their eyes' health, so some people have a tendency to use these books instead of E-books. Such as the case for me, when reading a book by computer, my eyes are sure to itching. In addition, in some areas people suffer from a lack of access to the internet and advanced facilities, hence they have no choice and they should use traditional books for their purposes. In conclusion, I believe that despite all progress in technology, the role of paper-based books should not be denied and we need both of them for our aims.
Our life
is surrounded
by numerous types of technological devices that
some
of them
use
are using to catch information. By emerging digital
books
and the websites of news and science,
some
people
believe that technology will completely cause them to disappear print out
books
. I would
agree
that the number of printed
books
will decrease
significantly
in the future,
but
I do believe that paper-based
books
will never
be replaced
totally
.

The number of
people
who
use
E-books and computers for reading, increase
dramatically
in the last decades. Perhaps the main reason why reading news and
books
on the internet are becoming the
first
priority for
some
people
is
that,
people
can read the latest news at the moment
so
they are
still
updated.
Besides
, they can access the content of the articles and
books
easily
. Take
some
researchers as an example,
sometimes
they should find a specific sentence in the
book
, it is
clear
that browsing through the E-books for finding this word is more convenient than paper-based books.

Although the
use
of digital
books
is becoming more popular, the importance of traditional
books
and magazines should not be
ignored
. It
is considered
that the radiation of the computer screen would cause eye irritation, and give a
negative
effect on their eyes' health,
so
some
people
have a tendency to
use
these
books
instead
of E-books. Such as the case for me, when reading a
book
by computer, my eyes are sure to itching.
In addition
, in
some
areas
people
suffer from a lack of access to the internet and advanced facilities,
hence
they have no
choice and
they should
use
traditional
books
for their purposes.

In conclusion
, I believe that despite all progress in technology, the role of paper-based
books
should not be
denied and
we need both of them for our aims.
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8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Some people say that E-books and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspaper and magazines. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
306 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
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Lexical Resource: 8.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
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    Present relevant ideas
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