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Some people say that E books and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspaper and magazines to what extent do you agree or disagree. v.3

Some people say that E books and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspaper and magazines v. 3
Some Individuals make a statement that E books and modern technology will completely take over the everyday newspaper and magazines. I agree with the statement. Today we are living in a technological era where everything is replaced with technology and people are depending on the technology in present generation more than ever. Do you have a soft copy of those books? Can I get that book online? These probably are the conversations that are happening around the world at this point. Let's consider Amazon Kindle Application where you can pay and download your favourite book within minutes. I am stating this because, Now-a-days everything we use is completely a soft copy than a hard copy. People are attracted to the technology probably because it is making our lives easier and it became an all in one where it has everything you desire. Society is depending mostly on the technology because it is proving you Entertainment, Information and Knowledge with or without paying any money. Consider Google, It is providing online news, Videos, Notes maker, mail checker and much more. Today, If you have a data connection the world is in your hands. You can access, control and utilize many things just with a click (with security). In conclusion, it wouldn't be even a surprise If the E books replace the newspapers and magazines because no one is interested in carrying extra luggage nor allocating a special place to store them. These days people want to get everything instantly than waiting. I think, we wouldn't even get to see the newspaper in the future.
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a statement that E
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and modern
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everything
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people
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are depending
on the
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in present generation more than ever.

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books
? Can I
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get
that
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book
online? These
probably
are the conversations that are happening around the world at this point.
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Let
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favourite
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book
within minutes. I am stating this
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because
,
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Now
-a-days
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everything
we
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use
is completely a soft copy than a
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hard
copy.
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to the
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technology
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because
it is making our
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lives
easier and it became an
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all in one
where it has
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everything
you desire.

Society
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is depending
mostly
on the
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technology
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because
it is proving you Entertainment, Information and Knowledge with or without paying any money. Consider Google, It is providing online news, Videos, Notes maker, mail checker and much more.
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Today
, If you have a data connection the world is in your hands. You can access, control and utilize
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many
things
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just
with a click (with security).

In conclusion
, it wouldn't be even a surprise If the E
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books
replace the newspapers and magazines
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because
no one
is interested
in carrying extra luggage nor allocating a special place to store them. These days
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people
want to
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get
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everything
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instantly
than waiting. I
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think
, we wouldn't even
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to
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see
the newspaper in the future.
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14Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people say that E books and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspaper and magazines v. 3

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
263 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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