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Some people say that E-books and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspaper and magazines to what extent do you agree or disagree. v.2

Some people say that E-books and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspaper and magazines v. 2
The popularity of E-books and other modern technologies is increasing day by day all over the world. Some people predict that they will completely replace print out books, magazines or newspapers. In my opinion, this hypothesis might be happening based on two primary reasons. It is an indisputable fact that human can adapt to changes. In the ancient time, people used to write on the walls and create murals for information. Then they gradually adopted with writing on leathers and then on papers. Nowadays, nobody writes on those kind of materials for routine purposes. Like this, if everyone has access to the advance means, including tables and digital papers, the trend of writing information on conventional books and papers will slowly vanish. Furthermore, to produce paper as a principle material of the publishing industry, thousands of trees are annually felled. It is not without untold harm to the environment. The damage includes habitat loss, climate change and soil damage. Unequivocally, trees in rainforests are home to a vast number of animals ranging from insects to small mammals. By cutting these trees down, they will lose their dwelling. Therefore, encouraging people to use digital sources of books is an interesting policy which has currently attracted many environmentalists to reduce the consequences of logging. In conclusion, with regard to causes noticed I strongly believe that electronic content with world wide web will replace physical books and magazines in the near future.
The popularity of E-books and other modern technologies is increasing day by day all over the world.
Some
people
predict that they will completely replace print out
books
, magazines or newspapers. In my opinion, this hypothesis might be happening based on two primary reasons.

It is an indisputable fact that human can adapt to
changes
. In the ancient time,
people
used
to write on the walls and create murals for information. Then they
gradually
adopted with writing on leathers and then on papers. Nowadays, nobody writes on
those kind
of materials for routine purposes. Like this, if everyone has access to the advance means, including tables and digital papers, the trend of writing information on conventional
books
and papers will
slowly
vanish.

Furthermore
, to produce paper as a principle material of the publishing industry, thousands of trees are
annually
felled. It is not without untold harm to the environment. The damage includes habitat loss, climate
change
and soil damage.
Unequivocally
, trees in rainforests are home to a vast number of animals ranging from insects to
small
mammals. By cutting these trees down, they will lose their dwelling.
Therefore
, encouraging
people
to
use
digital sources of
books
is an interesting policy which has
currently
attracted
many
environmentalists to
reduce
the consequences of logging.

In conclusion
, with regard to causes noticed I
strongly
believe that electronic content with
world wide web
will replace physical
books
and magazines in the near future.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people say that E-books and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspaper and magazines v. 2

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  American English
4 paragraphs
239 words
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