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Some people say that E- books and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspaper and magazines to what extent do you agree or disagree v.1

Some people say that E- books and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspaper and magazines v. 1
In those previous days, when the e-reader is not that much familiar to the people, they tend to buy daily newspapers and magazines to get updated. It is highly beneficial to the paper industry, media and even for small petty shops. There is considerably great scope for the printing industry. But when e-books are introduced, though still daily newspapers are getting sold, not up to the level. Slowly, the habit of keeping newspapers / magazines in the hand and reading is vanishing. To be simple, Old aged people, or those who have not adapted to the technology, are using them. On the other hand, the cost of making a newspaper is high. Starting from purchasing papers to get avail in hands, it involves a lengthy process. Once a mistake is found in the end product, it cannot get corrected as the large amount of printing is done already. So the quality of writing the information causes decrease in its sale. Or it may produce different meaning to the reader. Or sometimes the printed papers are totally wasted as it cannot publish due to the prevailing pancreatic situations. Unpublished papers may get burnt in either direct way or indirect way. It will pollute the environment. But in case of e-books, all the above said are absent. No printing cost, paper cost, wastages, etc. Even though some mistakes found, it is immediately corrected and readily available to the readers. It doesn't involve lots of time. Within a fraction of a second, you can do anything. Even you can give your own comments to the articles. The disadvantages in E-books are, it may require some amount of subscriptions, internet connection, acquisition of articles (royalty problems), eye fatigue. But in today's world, it is not a big issue and not unsolvable. Wherever we are, we can read even from mobile phones, unless until internet / wifi connections are good. So, I agree with the e-books to some extent, to e-waste is not created.
In those previous days, when the e-reader is not that much familiar to the
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people
, they tend to
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buy
daily
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newspapers
and magazines to
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get
updated. It is
highly
beneficial to the paper industry, media and even for
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small
petty shops. There is
considerably
great scope for the printing industry.
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But
when e-books
are introduced
, though
still
daily
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newspapers
are getting sold, not up to the level.
Slowly
, the habit of keeping
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newspapers
/ magazines in the hand and reading is vanishing. To be simple,
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Old
aged
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people
, or those who have not adapted to the technology, are using them.

On the other hand
, the cost of making a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
newspaper
is high. Starting from purchasing papers to
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get
avail in hands, it involves a lengthy process. Once a mistake
is found
in the
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end
product, it cannot
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get
corrected as the large amount of printing
is done
already.
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So
the quality of writing the information causes decrease in its sale. Or it may produce
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different
meaning to the reader. Or
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sometimes
the printed papers are
totally
wasted as it cannot publish due to the prevailing pancreatic situations. Unpublished papers may
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get
burnt in either direct way or indirect way. It will pollute the environment.
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But
in case of e-books, all the above said are absent. No printing cost, paper cost,
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wastages
, etc.
Even though
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some
mistakes found, it is immediately corrected and
readily
available to the readers. It doesn't involve lots of time. Within a fraction of a second, you can do anything. Even you can give your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
comments to the articles.

The disadvantages in E-books are, it may require
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some
amount of subscriptions, internet connection, acquisition of articles (royalty problems), eye fatigue.
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But
in
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today
's world, it is not a
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big
issue and not unsolvable. Wherever we are, we can read even from mobile phones, unless until internet /
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wifi
connections are
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good
.
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So
, I
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agree
with the e-books to
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some
extent, to e-waste is not created.
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes
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IELTS essay Some people say that E- books and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspaper and magazines v. 1

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
329 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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