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Some people think that environmental problems are too big for individuals to solve, while others think that the government cannot solve these environmental problems unless individuals make some action. Discuss both views and give your opinion. v.5

Some people think that environmental problems are too big for individuals to solve, while others think that the government cannot solve these environmental problems unless individuals make some action. v. 5
The issue of environmental problems has become a matter of discussion for many. Some people argue that such global issues cannot be solved by an individual, while others disagree. Personally, I believe that it will require a cumulative effort from both public and government to mitigate this world-wide pandemic. In this essay, I shall examine both points of view and outline the solutions. On the one hand, it is true that certain environmental problems cannot be solved by an individual. For example, today a large portion of the oil is transported between various countries through cargo ships and any accidental damage to such ships, often results into millions of gallons of toxic crude oil being dumped into the sea. Studies have shown that oil-mining industries are the major part of water pollution in the sea. Thus, it is clear that the public cannot take any effort to stop this issue and only government could prevent it by enforcing stricter regulations. Furthermore, our today's economy and industries, primarily depend on electricity produced by coal and to fuel its ever increasing demand, government of many nations are constantly constructing more power plants that run on burning coal. Such type of power plants is one of the main reasons for rapidly increasing air pollution. Adding to this, statistically it is shown that efforts made by individuals have little to no effect in preventing pollution from the coal industry. On the other hand, many environmental issues require actions from public. For example, soil pollution in major cities is a growing concern, due to the lack of awareness about recycling in general public. Government in many countries is constantly struggling to limit such type of pollution, however, it can only be resolved if each and every individual takes the responsibility of practicing positive recycling habits. In conclusion, from the given arguments and examples it is apparent that environmental problems are a global issue, that will demand the effort from everyone in the society. So what can be done? I believe that the problem has to be tackled on a number of levels. In the future, we could expect to see improvement only if we work together against such issues.
The
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problems
has become a matter of discussion for
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many
.
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Some
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people
argue that such global
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issues
cannot
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by an
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individual
, while others disagree.
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, I believe that it will require a cumulative
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effort
from both
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public
and
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government
to mitigate this world-wide pandemic. In this essay, I shall examine both points of view and outline the solutions.

On the one hand, it is true that certain
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environmental
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problems
cannot
be solved
by an
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individual
.
For example
,
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today
a large portion of the oil
is transported
between various countries through cargo ships and any accidental damage to such ships,
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often
results into millions of gallons of toxic crude oil
being dumped
into the sea. Studies have shown that oil-mining industries are the major part of water
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pollution
in the sea.
Thus
, it is
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clear
that the
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public
cannot take any
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effort
to
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stop
this
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issue
and
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only
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government
could
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prevent
it by enforcing stricter regulations.
Furthermore
, our
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today
's economy and industries,
primarily
depend on electricity produced by coal and to fuel its
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ever increasing
demand,
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government
of
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many
nations are
constantly
constructing more power plants that run on burning coal. Such type of power plants is one of the main reasons for
rapidly
increasing air
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pollution
. Adding to this,
statistically
it
is shown
that
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efforts
made by
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individuals
have
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little
to no effect in preventing
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pollution
from the coal industry.

On the other hand
,
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many
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environmental
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issues
require actions from
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public
.
For example
, soil
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pollution
in major cities is a growing concern, due to the lack of awareness about recycling
in general
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public
.
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Government
in
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many
countries is
constantly
struggling to limit such type of
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pollution
,
however
, it can
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only
be resolved
if each and every
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individual
takes the responsibility of practicing
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positive
recycling habits.

In conclusion
, from the
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given
arguments and examples it is apparent that
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environmental
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problems
are a global
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issue
, that will demand the
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effort
from everyone in the society.
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So
what can
be done
? I believe that the
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problem
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has to
be tackled
on a number of levels. In the future, we could
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expect
to
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see
improvement
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only
if we work together against such
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issues
.
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IELTS essay Some people think that environmental problems are too big for individuals to solve, while others think that the government cannot solve these environmental problems unless individuals make some action. v. 5

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
364 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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