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Some people say that criminals should be sent to prison. Others insist that they should do something else as a punishment. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. v.1

Some people say that criminals should be sent to prison. Others insist that they should do something else as a punishment. v. 1
Nowadays there is a dramatic increase in the usage of the animal to fulfil human needs. Some people claim that animals also hold the same right to live, and this is why a human being should stop using them for their wishes, while others argue that there is no alternative to the use of animal for certain purposes like for consumption and essential scientific experiments. This essay will discuss both views and will come up with the conclusion. Every living organism on this earth has the same privilege to fight for life. The animal serves various purposes which help other living creatures in tremendous ways. For instance, eggs from chicken used by the human for eating. Animals are speechless and cannot express their anger and dissatisfaction while they are being abused. If people continuously exploit animals for their own needs, then in near future we may lose some important species of animal. So, it is the responsibility of people to be empathetic with innocent beastly and protect them. On the other hand, there are certain tasks which require the use of animal, For example, as a mean of the research sample. There are various scientific laboratories and pharmaceutical research centres which uses the rabbit or the mice to test the effectiveness of the certain drugs or methods on them, before implementing it on other living organisms. In a situation like this, it is unavoidable to use them because they represent similar characteristics as a human does. Although, animal act as a useful mean in certain activities, I believe that we should respect their dignity to live and only use them in the situation where there is no better alternative is available. For example, one can avoid hunting wild creature just for the hobby, or people can also switch to the other options for the food rather than killing aphonic creatures. To conclude, to save the precious heritage of our animal species human should move towards finding better resources to fulfil their needs, and respect the right of the speechless animals. They should only be used in circumstances where using other alternatives may lead to the worst impact.
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animal
to fulfil
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human
needs.
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Some
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people
claim that
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animals
also
hold the same right to
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live
, and this is why a
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human
being should
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stop
using them for their wishes, while others argue that there is no alternative to the
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use
of
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animal
for
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certain
purposes like for consumption and essential scientific experiments. This essay will discuss both views and will
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come
up with the conclusion.

Every living organism on this earth has the same privilege to fight for life. The
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animal
serves various purposes which
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help
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other
living creatures in tremendous ways.
For instance
, eggs from chicken
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used
by the
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human
for eating.
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Animals
are speechless and cannot express their anger and dissatisfaction while they are
being abused
. If
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people
continuously
exploit
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animals
for their
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own
needs, then in near future we may lose
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some
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important
species of
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animal
.
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So
, it is the responsibility of
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people
to be empathetic with innocent
beastly
and protect them.

On the
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other
hand, there are
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certain
tasks which require the
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use
of
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animal
,
For example
, as a mean of the research sample. There are various scientific laboratories and pharmaceutical research
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centres
which
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uses
the rabbit or the mice to
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test
the effectiveness of the
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certain
drugs or methods on them,
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before
implementing it on
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other
living organisms. In a situation like this, it is unavoidable to
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use
them
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because
they represent similar characteristics as a
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human
does. Although,
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animal
act as a useful mean in
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certain
activities, I believe that we should respect their dignity to
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live
and
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only
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use
them in the situation where there is no better alternative is available.
For example
, one can avoid hunting wild creature
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just
for the hobby, or
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people
can
also
switch to the
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other
options for the food
rather
than killing
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aphonic
creatures.

To conclude
, to save the precious heritage of our
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animal
species
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human
should
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move
towards finding better resources to fulfil their needs, and respect the right of the speechless
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animals
. They should
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only
be
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used
in circumstances where using
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other
alternatives may lead to the worst impact.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people say that criminals should be sent to prison. Others insist that they should do something else as a punishment. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
357 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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