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Talk about a new skill that you would like to learn. Use details and examples to explain your answer. v.1

Talk about a new skill that you would like to learn. . v. 1
It is important for countries to have a free health service for their citizens, even though it may be impossible to include certain medical treatments due to costs. I strongly agree with the view that every country should provide free health service for her citizens. Provision of free healthcare by the government improves the overall quality of life of the citizens of such nation. This is because many people will visit the hospital as they are aware that payment is not needed in order to access treatment. As an illustration, Massey children hospital experienced a surge in the number of patients when the government decided to make medical care free for children. Also, provision of free treatment reduces mortality rate in a country. Even though expensive medical treatment is excluded from the health service, there will be an increase in the number of early diagnosis. Hence, timely medical intervention which in turn reduces the number of preventable deaths. For example, it is evident that the provision of free vaccines in many African countries has led to the eradication of preventable diseases like polio and chicken pox. Again, the availability of free medical care in a nation encourage the citizens to pay tax which will enhance economic development of such countries. For example, in Uganda where there is no free healthcare for anyone, it has been reported that the number of people that pay taxes have significantly decreased when compared to the amount of people that paid taxes during the previous government which made medical care free and accessible to all citizens. In conclusion, availability of free medical treatment will have many positive impacts on the overall quality of life of any country. Therefore, I strongly agree that all nations should make free health management available to their citizens.
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citizens
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medical
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treatments
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agree
with the view that every
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country
should provide
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free
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health
service for her citizens.

Provision of
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free
healthcare by the
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government
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improves
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citizens
of such nation. This is
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because
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many
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people
will visit the hospital as they are aware that payment is not needed in order to access
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treatment
. As an illustration, Massey children hospital experienced a surge in the
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number
of patients when the
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government
decided to
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make
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medical
care
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free
for children.

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, provision of
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treatment
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reduces
mortality rate in a
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country
.
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expensive
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medical
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treatment
is excluded
from the
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health
service, there will be an increase in the
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number
of early diagnosis.
Hence
, timely
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medical
intervention which in turn
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reduces
the
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number
of preventable deaths.
For example
, it is evident that the provision of
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free
vaccines in
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many
African
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countries
has led to the eradication of preventable diseases like polio and chicken pox.

Again, the availability of
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free
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medical
care in a nation encourage the
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citizens
to pay tax which will enhance economic development of such
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countries
.
For example
, in Uganda where there is no
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free
healthcare for anyone, it has
been reported
that the
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number
of
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people
that pay taxes have
significantly
decreased when compared to the amount of
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people
that paid taxes during the previous
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government
which made
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medical
care
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free
and accessible to all citizens.

In conclusion
, availability of
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free
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medical
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treatment
will have
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many
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positive
impacts on the
overall
quality of life of any
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country
.
Therefore
, I
strongly
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agree
that all nations should
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make
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free
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health
management available to their
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citizens
.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Talk about a new skill that you would like to learn. . v. 1

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
298 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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