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Some people say that children no longer need to develop handwriting skills, others believe that handwriting is still important. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. v.1

Some people say that children no longer need to develop handwriting skills, others believe that handwriting is still important. v. 1
Since technological sophistication has been flourishing by leaps and bounds, learning skills of handwriting are no longer in the priority list of individuals while some people subscribe to this belief that even nowadays, handwriting plays an imperative role in everyone's life. Although some consider it of no value because every writing task is performed on computers, this essay believes that it is still a vital skill that makes one creative. On the one hand, it is often considered by many that handwriting is no more pivotal these days. Given the reliance of humans on today's vast technology, it is quite clear that every task whether they are presentations, assignments or emails occur on the laptops. In other words, people find limited access to hand-written things in their daily lives and are more likely indulging in electronic gadgets for their work. For example, in developed countries such as Canada, Switzerland, and France, people heavily rely on desktops for their office as well as schoolwork. However, I disagree with this viewpoint as it makes individuals less productive. On the other hand, I opine with those who believe that handwriting skills plays an imperative role in person's life because it not only make them creative but also elaborates the thought process. Most of the developing countries such as India, Pakistan and China undertake examinations by traditional style, which is pen and paper based. For this reason, good handwriting is required so that mentors can understand the text. In addition, rather than emails, some companies prefer official letters written by employees since they thought this way is more effective. Eminent psychologists have revealed that when people write by hand then their ideas would develop at a faster pace instead of typing on desktops. To conclude, eventhough people may vary in their opinions as some feel that handwriting skills are not required these days, I believe that it has still important role in elaborating thinking and making a person creative.
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skills
of
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handwriting
are no longer in the priority list of individuals while
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some
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people
subscribe to this belief that even nowadays,
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handwriting
plays an imperative role in everyone's life. Although
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some
consider it of no value
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because
every writing task
is performed
on computers, this essay believes that it is
still
a vital
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skill
that
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makes
one creative.

On the one hand, it is
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often
considered by
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many
that
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handwriting
is no more pivotal these days.
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Given
the reliance of humans on
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today
's vast technology, it is quite
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clear
that every task whether they are presentations, assignments or emails occur on the laptops.
In other words
,
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people
find limited access to hand-written things in their daily
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lives
and are more likely indulging in electronic gadgets for their work.
For example
, in
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developed countries
such as Canada, Switzerland, and France,
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people
heavily
rely on desktops for their office
as well
as schoolwork.
However
, I disagree with this viewpoint as it
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makes
individuals less productive.

On the other hand
, I opine with those who believe that
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handwriting
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skills
plays an imperative role in person's life
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because
it not
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only
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make
them creative
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but
also
elaborates the
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thought
process. Most of the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
developing countries
such as India, Pakistan and China undertake examinations by traditional style, which is pen and paper based.
For this reason
,
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good
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handwriting
is required
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so
that mentors can understand the text.
In addition
,
rather
than emails,
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some
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companies
prefer official letters written by employees since they
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
thought
this way is more effective. Eminent psychologists have revealed that when
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people
write by hand then their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
ideas
would develop at a faster pace
instead
of typing on desktops.

To conclude
,
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people
may vary in their opinions as
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some
feel that
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handwriting
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skills
are not required these days, I believe that it has
still
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important
role in elaborating thinking and making a person creative.
18Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
15Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people say that children no longer need to develop handwriting skills, others believe that handwriting is still important. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
325 words
6.5
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