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Because of modern technology it is no longer necessary for people to learn handwriting skills but other believe that handwriting is still an important skills Discuss both views and give ur opinion v.2

Because of modern technology it is no longer necessary for people to learn handwriting skills but other believe that handwriting is still an important skills 2
There are people who think that with the advancement in technology the need to learn handwriting skills has vanished. However, others believe that it is an essential skill which must be learnt. I believe it should be learned because it enhances the creativity of people. Undoubtedly, it is no longer required to master handwriting skills because due to modern technology everything which once was to be written by hands is replaced by typing. Increased number of universities and organizations are solely dependant on computers to print information and notices. Even the students take exam on computers where they have to type the answers and this system is entirely replacing the paper delivered exam system. Therefore, it would be absurd to waste time on learning a skill which would be of no benefit. A report shows that examinations in most of universities are being taken on computers lately. On the other hand, learning hadwriting skill is crucial. No matter how much the technology advances, it can not entirely eliminate the need of acquiring this skill because it increases the creativity of individuals. The ones who learn and master this skill got the chance to experiment with their writing hence, it would enhance their creative skills. Moreover, it also assist in learning arts and enable one to use pen. If one would not be confident with using pen, it would be difficult for them to use brushes and paint masterpieces. A study was conducted in the US which showed that children who learnt handwriting skills were full of ideas and more creative. To conclude, although the usage of handwriting skill is becoming obsolete with advances in technology, it is essential as it broadens the mind of individuals and I entirely favor the notion that it is absolutely essential.
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people
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that with the advancement in
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technology
the need to learn
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handwriting
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skills
has vanished.
However
, others believe that it is an essential
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skill
which
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must
be
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learnt
. I believe it should
be learned
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because
it enhances the creativity of
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people
.

Undoubtedly
, it is no longer required to master
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handwriting
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skills
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because
due to modern
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technology
everything which once was to
be written
by hands
is replaced
by typing. Increased number of universities and organizations are
solely
Did you mean "dependent" on?
dependant
on computers to print information and notices. Even the students take exam on computers where they
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
type the answers and this system is
entirely
replacing the paper delivered exam system.
Therefore
, it would be absurd to waste time on learning a
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skill
which would be of no benefit. A report
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shows
that examinations in
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most of universities
are
being taken
on computers lately.

On the other hand
, learning
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hadwriting
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skill
is crucial. No matter how much the
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technology
advances, it can not
entirely
eliminate the need of acquiring this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
skill
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because
it increases the creativity of individuals. The ones who learn and master this
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skill
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got
the chance to experiment with their writing
hence
, it would enhance their creative
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skills
.
Moreover
, it
also
Did you mean "assists"?
assist
in learning arts and enable one to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
pen. If one would not be confident with using pen, it would be difficult for them to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
brushes and paint masterpieces. A study
was conducted
in the US which
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
showed
that children who
Possible spelling mistake. 'learnt' is British English.
learnt
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
handwriting
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skills
were full of
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ideas
and more creative.

To conclude
, although the usage of
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handwriting
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
skill
is becoming obsolete with advances in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
technology
, it is essential as it broadens the mind of individuals and I
entirely
favor the notion that it is
absolutely
essential.
10Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
18Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes

IELTS essay Because of modern technology it is no longer necessary for people to learn handwriting skills but other believe that handwriting is still an important skills 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
296 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
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