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Because of modern technology it is no longer necessary for people to learn handwriting skills but other believe that handwriting is still an important skills Discuss both views and give ur opinion v.1

Because of modern technology it is no longer necessary for people to learn handwriting skills but other believe that handwriting is still an important skills 1
People have different views about how governments should measure their countries’ progress. While economic progress is of course essential, I agree with those who believe that other measures of progress are just as important. There are three key reasons why economic growth is seen as a fundamental goal for countries. Firstly, a healthy economy results in job creation, a high level of employment, and better salaries for all citizens. Secondly, economic progress ensures that more money is available for governments to spend on infrastructure and public services. For example, a government with higher revenues can invest in the country's transport network, its education system and its hospitals. Finally, a strong economy can help a country’s standing on the global stage, in terms of its political influence and trading power. However, I would argue that various other forms of progress are just as significant as the economic factors mentioned above. In particular, we should consider the area of social justice, human rights, equality and democracy itself. For example, the treatment of minority groups is often seen as a reflection of the moral standards and level of development of a society. Perhaps another key consideration when judging the progress of a modern country should be how well that country protects the natural environment, and whether it is moving towards environmental sustainability. Alternatively, the success of a nation could be measured by looking at the health, wellbeing and happiness of its residents. In conclusion, the economy is obviously a key marker of a country’s success, but social, environmental and health criteria are equally significant.
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There are three key reasons why
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economic
growth is
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seen
as a fundamental goal for
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countries
.
Firstly
, a healthy economy results in job creation, a high level of employment, and better salaries for all citizens.
Secondly
,
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economic
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progress
ensures that more money is available for
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governments
to spend on infrastructure and public services.
For example
, a
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government
with higher revenues can invest in the country's transport network, its education system and its hospitals.
Finally
, a strong economy can
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help
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country’s
standing on the global stage, in terms of its political influence and trading power.

However
, I would argue that various other forms of
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progress
are
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just
as significant as the
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economic
factors mentioned above.
In particular
, we should consider the area of social justice, human rights, equality and democracy itself.
For example
, the treatment of minority groups is
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often
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seen
as a reflection of the moral standards and level of development of a society. Perhaps another key consideration when judging the
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progress
of a modern
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country
should be how well that
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country
protects the natural environment, and whether it is moving towards environmental sustainability.
Alternatively
, the success of a nation could
be measured
by looking at the health,
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wellbeing
and happiness of its residents.

In conclusion
, the economy is
obviously
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country’s
success,
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but
social, environmental and health criteria are
equally
significant.
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IELTS essay Because of modern technology it is no longer necessary for people to learn handwriting skills but other believe that handwriting is still an important skills 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
261 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
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