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Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with? v.6

Advertising is already beacone a vital part of everyone's life. Every kind of business is running with the help of marketing. Advertising can be in any way like through social media, person to person and hoardings. But, the most popular one is with networking through social media. Because, it's the most easiest and cheapest way of marketing. Firstly, in my opinion folks can get attract by the advertising material to buy more things than they need to buy. Beacause when someone get notice with various sales material they always try to reach that things only thought of window shopping but, they spend more more money than they suppose to do. In this way many organizations do a lot of with sales but not every customer get the relevant stuff. Because with every sales material the seller always try to sell irrelevant material to just increase the sale. Like, in quarantine I was always surfing the net to spend my time and with that I started shopping online and bought unnecessary things that I didn't even use afterwards. On other hand, if people try to be smart with their daily expenses they can tackle the problem of over shopping. Because, advertising can't force someone to buy something. At last, advertising is the important aspect for daily way life. It's help in many ways to start trying new things. And as to do something adventuress in life we need to start trying new things with profit and loss.

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 a vital part of everyone's life. Every kind of business is running with the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 of marketing.

Advertising can be in any way like through social media, person to person and hoardings. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
, the most popular one is with networking through social media. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
Because
, it's the Use only “easiest” (without ‘most’) when you use the superlative.easiest
most easiest
 and cheapest way of marketing.

Firstly
, in my opinion folks can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
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material
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buy
 more things than they need to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
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get
 notice with various You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpurchasetransactiondealbusinessauctionmarketing
sales
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material
 they always try to reach that things This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonedassumedbelievedconsidered
thought
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but
, they spend Use only “more” (without ‘more’) when you use the comparative.more
more more
 money than they suppose to do.

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many
 organizations do This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
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sales
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but
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get
 the relevant stuff. “Because” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Because
 with every You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpurchasetransactiondealbusinessauctionmarketing
sales
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material
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material
 to This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 increase the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpurchasetransactiondealbusinessauctionmarketing
sale
. Like, in quarantine I was always surfing the net to spend my time and with that I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 shopping online and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 unnecessary things that I didn't even This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 afterwards.

On other hand, if This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 try to be smart with their daily expenses they can tackle the problem of over shopping. “Because” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Because
, advertising can't force someone to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 something.

At last, advertising is the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 aspect for daily way life. It's This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 ways to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 trying new things. And as to do something adventuress in life we need to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 trying new things with profit and loss. 