The purpose of advertising is to tell the consumer about any new product or work or any new promotion on the existing product and work. We need it so we can make good decisions when we go shopping. Advertising tells us when new and improved products become available and lets us know which ones have the best price.
Through advertisements, we learn about new products. For example, many grocery stores now sell prepackaged lunches. These are very convenient for busy parents. They can give these lunches to their children to take to school. Busy parents don’t have time to look at every item on the store shelf, so without advertisements, they might not know about such a convenient new product.
Even products we are familiar with may be improved, and advertising lets us know about this. Most people use cell phones, but new types of cell phone service become available all the time. There are different plans that give you more hours to talk on the phone, you can send text messages and photos, and next week probably some even newer type of service will be available. By watching advertisements on TV it is easy to find out about new improvements to all kinds of products.
Advertisements keep us informed about prices. Prices change all the time, but everyone can look at the ads in the newspaper and see what the latest prices are. Advertisements also inform us about sales. In fact, some people buy the newspaper only in order to check the prices and plan their weekly shopping.
Advertisements improve our lives by keeping us informed about the latest product developments and the best prices. Advertisements serve a useful purpose.
The purpose of advertising is to
tell
the consumer about any
new
product
or work or any
new
promotion on the existing
product
and work. We need it
so
we can
make
good
decisions when we go shopping. Advertising
tells
us when
new
and
improved
products
become available and
lets
us know which ones have the best price.
Through
advertisements
, we learn about
new
products
.
For example
,
many
grocery stores
now
sell prepackaged lunches. These are
very
convenient for busy parents. They can give these lunches to their children to take to school. Busy parents don’t have time to look at every item on the store shelf,
so
without
advertisements
, they might not know about such a convenient
new
product.
Even
products
we are familiar with may be
improved
, and advertising
lets
us know about this. Most
people
use
cell phones,
but
new
types of cell phone service become available all the time. There are
different
plans that give you more hours to talk on the phone, you can
send
text messages and photos, and
next
week
probably
some
even newer type of service will be available. By watching
advertisements
on TV it is easy to find out about
new
improvements to all kinds of products.
Advertisements
keep
us informed about
prices
.
Prices
change
all the time,
but
everyone can look at the ads in the newspaper and
see
what the latest
prices
are.
Advertisements
also
inform us about sales. In fact,
some
people
buy
the newspaper
only
in order to
check
the
prices
and plan their weekly shopping.
Advertisements
improve
our
lives
by keeping us informed about the latest
product
developments and the best
prices
.
Advertisements
serve a useful purpose.
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