The definition of the success varies from person to person. Although some people claim that an individual’s success is directly proportionate to their parent’s upbringing, I, however, disagree with this view for two reasons.
The first reason why the achievement of success is not directly connected with the upbringing of guardian is due to trying multiple time till it is achieved. While it is argued that everyone in their life strives for having a success, I believe that most of them quit in the middle and often do not give the second chance to tasting it. Consider Elon Musk as an example, who has experienced the success by sending the rocket in the Mars at his tenth attempt despite having the failure several times. Thus, a person should not quit before achieving their goal.
The talent with hard work in the life is another reason. Whereas I concede that many of them do the hard work to become successful one day in the future, I would argue that hard work will not pay off until an individual has the talent in that particular field. For example, if any industrialist compelled their child to become a businessman despite having the talent of singing, their continuous efforts in the business would not give fruitful results. Therefore, any person could get the success with their hard work if they worked in the field where their interest is.
In short, not only does an individual get success in their life because of multiple try, but also choosing the right field with an attitude of hard work. Therefore, I strongly disagree with the view of those who connect the success with the nurture of the family.
The definition of the
success
varies from
person
to
person
. Although
some
people
claim that an individual’s
success
is
directly
proportionate to their parent’s upbringing, I,
however
, disagree with this view for two reasons.
The
first
reason why the achievement of
success
is not
directly
connected with the upbringing of guardian is due to trying multiple time till it
is achieved
. While it
is argued
that everyone in their life strives for having a
success
, I believe that most of them quit in the middle and
often
do not give the second chance to tasting it. Consider Elon Musk as an example, who has experienced the
success
by sending the rocket in the Mars at his tenth attempt despite having the failure several times.
Thus
, a
person
should not quit
before
achieving their goal.
The talent with
hard
work
in the life is another reason. Whereas I concede that
many
of them do the
hard
work
to become successful one day in the future, I would argue that
hard
work
will not pay off until an individual has the talent in that particular field.
For example
, if any industrialist compelled their child to become a businessman despite having the talent of singing, their continuous efforts in the business would not give fruitful results.
Therefore
, any
person
could
get
the
success
with their
hard
work
if they worked in the field where their interest is.
In short, not
only
does an individual
get
success
in their life
because
of multiple try,
but
also
choosing the right field with an attitude of
hard
work
.
Therefore
, I
strongly
disagree with the view of those who connect the
success
with the nurture of the family.
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