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Print Media, including magazines and newspapers, will soon be completely replaced by internet news sources. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? v.1

Print Media, including magazines and newspapers, will soon be completely replaced by internet news sources. with this statement? v. 1
Nobody doubts that we live in a rapidly changing time. The technology of the past is being replaced every day, as seen in music recording, map-making, and many other areas. Print media is, of course, affected by this change, and many think that paper news sources will soon disappear. But while magazines and newspapers may become less popular, they will probably not vanish completely. If there is a practical use for a product, then people will continue to buy it. Even though newspapers and magazines are often unnecessary, there are times when they can be useful, too. Many subway systems do not have mobile internet service, for example, and so passengers read newspapers instead of using their smartphones or computers. Similarly, many countries do not yet have widespread mobile internet access. It will be a long time before that changes, and until then, print media will continue to be useful. Besides being practical, physical news sources are more enjoyable for some people. Reading from a screen can create stress, whereas reading from paper can be quite relaxing. Since we access internet news on the same devices we use for work and communication, phones and computers, we are often distracted by emails, text messages, and other responsibilities. Magazines and newspapers, meanwhile, offer an opportunity to escape from the stress of modern technology. This makes it difficult for internet news to totally replace print media. As long as people want print media, news companies will continue to sell it. Although new technology might grow and physical copies might become less popular, we should not expect them to disappear. And as a newspaper reader, I, personally, take comfort in that.
Nobody doubts that we
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live
in a
rapidly
changing time. The technology of the past is
being replaced
every day, as
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seen
in music recording, map-making, and
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many
other areas.
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Print
media is,
of course
,
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affected
by this
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change
, and
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many
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think
that paper
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news
sources will
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soon
disappear.
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But
while magazines and
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newspapers
may become less popular, they will
probably
not vanish completely.

If there is a practical
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use
for a product, then
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people
will continue to
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buy
it.
Even though
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newspapers
and magazines are
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often
unnecessary, there are times when they can be useful, too.
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Many
subway systems do not have mobile internet service,
for example
, and
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so
passengers read
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newspapers
instead
of using their smartphones or computers.
Similarly
,
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many
countries do not
yet
have widespread mobile internet access. It will be a long time
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before
that
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changes
, and until then,
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print
media will continue to be useful.

Besides
being practical, physical
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news
sources are more enjoyable for
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some
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people
. Reading from a screen can create
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stress
, whereas reading from paper can be quite relaxing. Since we access internet
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news
on the same devices we
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use
for work and communication, phones and computers, we are
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often
distracted by emails, text messages, and other responsibilities. Magazines and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
newspapers
, meanwhile, offer an opportunity to escape from the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stress
of modern technology. This
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makes
it difficult for internet
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news
to
totally
replace
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print
media.

As long as
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people
want
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print
media,
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news
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companies
will continue to sell it. Although
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new
technology might grow and physical copies might become less popular, we should not
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expect
them to disappear. And as a
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newspaper
reader, I,
personally
, take comfort in that.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
15Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes

IELTS essay Print Media, including magazines and newspapers, will soon be completely replaced by internet news sources. with this statement? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
277 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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