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Some people say that a country should produce food locally, while others believe that it is good to import food. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion and relevant examples. v.1

Some people say that a country should produce food locally, while others believe that it is good to import food. Give your opinion and relevant examples. v. 1
Nowadays, a lot of countries import their food. People have divided views on whether nations should source food locally or import it. This essay will argue why it is a good idea for governments to produce their own food. For centuries, countries have been importing various food items from other countries. Some sections of the society think that is the only way to fulfill the rising demand of certain items. Moreover, importing food items that are not locally grown allows the people of a nation to taste and make use of them. For instance, India is the largest producer of sugar, but to fulfill the needs of its ever growing population, it has to import a huge amount of sugar. These few reasons have strengthened the notion of getting products from other nations. Despite the above reasons, the idea of importing food products is completely misconstructed. Imported food items are cold stored and travel long distances, thus they lose their freshness and nutrients, while locally grown produce is always fresh. Also, the fact that foreign items lure the modern public makes it hard for the local farmers to sell their produce and earn their livelihood, often leading them into debts or forcing them to take up other professions. A recent study done by Harvard University has shown that local produce on average is seventy percent more fresh and healthier than the imports. Overall, the concept of sourcing food from other nations is completely flawed. To conclude, people have different views when it comes to food being produced locally versus imported. This essay argued why it is rational for countries to consume home-grown products instead of importing it from outside. In my opinion, imported food is stale and selling it discourages the farmers of a community.
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food
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locally
or
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import
it. This essay will argue why it is a
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good
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for
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governments
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own
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For centuries,
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countries
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food
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countries
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sections of the society
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only
way to fulfill the rising demand of certain
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items
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food
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locally
grown
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to fulfill the needs of its ever growing population, it
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a huge amount of sugar. These few reasons have strengthened the notion of getting products from
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other
nations.

Despite the above reasons, the
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idea
of
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products is completely
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misconstructed
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food
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items
are
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cold
stored and travel long distances,
thus
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locally
grown
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produce
is always fresh.
Also
, the fact that foreign
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items
lure the modern public
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makes
it
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hard
for the local farmers to sell their
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produce
and earn their livelihood,
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leading them into debts or forcing them to take up
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other
professions. A recent study done by Harvard University has shown that local
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produce
on average is seventy percent more fresh and healthier than the
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imports
.
Overall
, the concept of sourcing
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food
from
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other
nations is completely flawed.

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,
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being produced
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versus imported. This essay argued why it is rational for
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countries
to consume home-grown products
instead
of
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importing
it from outside. In my opinion, imported
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food
is stale and selling it discourages the farmers of a community.
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IELTS essay Some people say that a country should produce food locally, while others believe that it is good to import food. Give your opinion and relevant examples. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
295 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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