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Some people think that it is good for a country's culture to import foreign movies and TV programmes. Others think that it is better to produce these locally. Discuss both views and give your opinion. v.1

Some people think that it is good for a country's culture to import foreign movies and TV programmes. Others think that it is better to produce these locally. v. 1
The entertainment industry has a huge impact in today's life. It includes movies, TV serials, reality shows and news channels etc. Without the help of media one cannot fulfil his requirements, especially in this century. Now, let's talk about the effect of importing foreign movies and TV programmes on the country's culture. When other region's cultural movies and TV shows are brought in the nation, people can learn about the way of living of humans all around the world and thus, can imbibe the useful qualities of those citizens. Moreover, thorough international news channels, they remain aware of the things happening on this planet and acquire knowledge of all streams over the sea, like science and technology, economy, political system etc. Which can become the route to get new and unique creative ideas to do something productive. On the other hand, the negative effects of television programmes from abroad, on the country's culture is non-avoidable. It is a saying of ancient times, that when one forgets his own history, one is no longer on the path of success and growth. So, hiring new ideas from all around is not a bad thing that said you cannot let these skills to replace your own. Rather, it is excellent to mix them with the existing ones and produce something extraordinary. Adding to this, one can enjoy a cheerful and jubilant life and can contribute to the development of his region too. At the end of the day, it can be concluded that it totally depends upon ourselves that how we use the attained learnings of the different nations. If one makes efficient use of these, one can get brilliant results. On the contrary side, improper way may lead him to the consequences that may destroy one's own abilities too.
The entertainment industry has a huge impact in
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today
's life. It includes movies, TV serials, reality
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shows
and
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news
channels etc. Without the
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help
of media one cannot fulfil his requirements,
especially
in this century.

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Now
,
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let
's talk about the effect of importing foreign movies and TV
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programmes
on the country's culture. When other region's cultural movies and TV
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shows
are brought
in the nation,
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people
can learn about the way of living of humans all around the world and
thus
, can imbibe the useful qualities of those citizens.
Moreover
, thorough international
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news
channels, they remain aware of the things happening on this planet and acquire knowledge of all streams over the sea, like science and technology, economy, political system etc. Which can become the route to
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get
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new
and unique creative
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ideas
to do something productive.

On the other hand
, the
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negative
effects of television
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programmes
from abroad, on the country's culture is non-avoidable. It is a saying of ancient times, that when one forgets his
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own
history, one is no longer on the path of success and growth.
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So
, hiring
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new
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ideas
from all around is not a
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bad
thing that said you cannot
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let
these
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skills
to replace your
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own
.
Rather
, it is excellent to mix them with the existing ones and produce something extraordinary. Adding to this, one can enjoy a cheerful and jubilant life and can contribute to the development of his region too.

At the
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end
of the day, it can
be concluded
that it
totally
depends upon ourselves that how we
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use
the attained learnings of the
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different
nations. If one
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makes
efficient
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use
of these, one can
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get
brilliant results.
On the contrary
side, improper way may lead him to the consequences that may
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destroy
one's
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own
abilities too.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes
If you talk to a man in a language he understands, that goes to his head. If you talk to him in his own language, that goes to his heart.
Nelson Mandela

IELTS essay Some people think that it is good for a country's culture to import foreign movies and TV programmes. Others think that it is better to produce these locally. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
297 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
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  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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