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Some people say learners should start their debating and presentation skills in their early age rather than in their higher institutes. To what extent you agree. v.1

Some people say learners should start their debating and presentation skills in their early age rather than in their higher institutes. v. 1
Communication skills like debating and presentations play an inevitable role in leading an active social life. Some people argue that students should start developing communication skills from an early age as compared to building them in higher institutes. I completely agree with this stance and many plausible arguments could be placed in favour of this view. To start with, interpersonal skills are an indispensable factor for maintaining a healthy lifestyle. These skills boost up the confidence level and groom one's personality. So, it is essential to learn such skills from an early age. Scientific researches have proved that a child learns faster as compared to an adult. Furthermore, the characteristics that developed from childhood have long-lasting effects. For example, in the past few decades, different studies have been carried out on individuals of various age groups. But, the results proved the effectiveness of learning in growing age more in comparison to mature age. In addition to this, when a student moves to the higher institute he has a lot of course work. So, if there is a strong base then it would be easy to focus on studies. Interpersonal skills improve the creativity of a student and make them multi-talented rather than a conventional and rout learner. Furthermore, debates and presentations also help in achieving global opportunities. For instance, every year higher education commission conduct debating competition and winners of such contests, then provided a chance to represent the country globally. Also, such type of training and learning, enhance most concrete ideas and aspects of the student's personality. Hence, it is advisable to learn such essential skills from childhood. To conclude, interpersonal skills, play a critical role in academic as well as professional life. Hence, it is advantageous to have a command over them from an early age as a man is known for its communication and speaking power.
Communication
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skills
like debating and presentations play an inevitable role in leading an active social life.
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Some
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argue that students should
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start
developing communication
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skills
from an early
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age
as compared to building them in higher institutes. I completely
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agree
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in
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favour
of this view.

To
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start
with, interpersonal
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skills
are an indispensable factor for maintaining a healthy lifestyle. These
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skills
boost up the confidence level and groom one's personality.
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So
, it is essential to learn such
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skills
from an early
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age
. Scientific researches have proved that a child learns faster as compared to an adult.
Furthermore
, the characteristics that developed from childhood have long-lasting effects.
For example
, in the past few decades,
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different
studies have
been carried
out on individuals of various
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age
groups.
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But
, the results proved the effectiveness of learning in growing
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age
more
in comparison
to mature age.

In addition
to this, when a student
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moves
to the higher institute he has a lot
of course
work.
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So, if
there is a strong base then it would be easy to focus on studies. Interpersonal
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skills
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improve
the creativity of a student and
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make
them multi-talented
rather
than a conventional and rout learner.
Furthermore
, debates and presentations
also
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help
in achieving global opportunities.
For instance
, every year higher education commission conduct debating competition and winners of such contests, then provided a chance to represent the country globally.
Also
, such type of training and learning, enhance most concrete
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ideas
and aspects of the student's personality.
Hence
, it is advisable to learn such essential
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skills
from childhood.

To conclude
, interpersonal
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skills
, play a critical role in academic
as well
as professional life.
Hence
, it is advantageous to have a command over them from an early
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age
as a
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man
is known
for its communication and speaking power.
15Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
13Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people say learners should start their debating and presentation skills in their early age rather than in their higher institutes. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
309 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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