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Some people say it is more important to plant trees in towns and cities than to build housing. Do you agree or disagree? v.1

Some people say it is more important to plant trees in towns and cities than to build housing. v. 1
I completely agree with the statement that it is more meaningful to plant trees in the open urban areas, rather than building more houses. Trees not only provide environmental benefits, but also provide numerous social and economic benefits. This essay intends to discuss my opinion and these benefits. Admittedly, housing is needed to meet the demands of the burgeoning population, but we can go for high-rise buildings and leave the open spaces for planting more and more trees. To begin with, the environmental benefits of trees, these help purify the polluted air in the cities and towns. Research has proven that 100 trees can remove tonnes of carbon dioxide annually. Trees are also known to create a buffer, which cuts down everyday noise of cities, thus tackling noise pollution also. To add to it, the water is also managed better, if there are more trees in a city. The rainwater doesn’t run off into drains if there are trees in urban areas. It is filtered into the ground, thus saving the city money that is spent on drains and artificial controls. Providing a natural habitat to birds and animals is another advantage. To add to it, trees also help save energy consumption. If planted in the right place, urban forests provide shade to homes, roads, office areas and parking spaces. Cooler homes and offices means, lesser air conditioning is needed, thus reducing the energy consumption. In parking lots too, trees help keep cars cooler, which leads to less pollution. Planting trees in cities helps the city grow socially and economically as well. They provide an area where people can meet, socialize and also exercise. Children also get a close to nature place, where they can play. The commercial value of an urban property with trees, is more than one without trees. Retail outlets and businesses located in areas with trees, attract more customers. To sum it up, we need houses in cities to live in, but to strengthen and improve the quality of the life in overcrowded cities we need trees. They play a vital role in combating climate change and provide numerous economic and social benefits.
I completely
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with the statement that it is more meaningful to plant
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trees
in the open
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urban
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rather
than building more
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houses
.
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Trees
not
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only
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provide
environmental
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benefits
,
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but
also
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provide
numerous social and economic
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benefits
. This essay intends to discuss my opinion and these benefits.

Admittedly
, housing
is needed
to
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meet
the demands of the burgeoning population,
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but
we can go for high-rise buildings and
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leave
the open spaces for planting more and more trees.

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begin
with, the environmental
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benefits
of
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trees
, these
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help
purify the polluted air in the
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cities
and towns. Research has proven that 100
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trees
can remove tonnes of carbon dioxide
annually
.
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Trees
are
also
known to create a buffer, which
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cuts
down everyday noise of
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cities
,
thus
tackling noise pollution
also
. To
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add
to it, the water is
also
managed better, if there are more
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trees
in a city. The rainwater doesn’t run off into drains if there are
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trees
in
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urban
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areas
. It
is filtered
into the ground,
thus
saving the city money that
is spent
on drains and artificial controls. Providing a natural habitat to birds and animals is another advantage.

To
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add
to it,
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trees
also
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help
save energy consumption. If planted in the right place,
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urban
forests
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provide
shade to homes, roads, office
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areas
and parking spaces. Cooler homes and offices means, lesser air conditioning
is needed
,
thus
reducing the energy consumption. In parking lots too,
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trees
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help
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keep
cars cooler, which leads to less pollution.

Planting
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trees
in
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cities
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helps
the city grow
socially
and
economically
as well
. They
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provide
an
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area
where
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people
can
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meet
, socialize and
also
exercise. Children
also
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get
a close to nature place, where they can play. The commercial value of an
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urban
property with
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trees
, is more than one without
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trees
. Retail outlets and businesses located in
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areas
with
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trees
, attract more customers.

To sum it up, we need
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houses
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cities
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live
in,
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to strengthen and
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improve
the quality of the life in overcrowded
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cities
we need
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trees
. They play a vital role in combating climate
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change
and
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provide
numerous economic and social
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benefits
.
16Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
41Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Some people say it is more important to plant trees in towns and cities than to build housing. v. 1

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
357 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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