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Some people say it is important to keep your home and workplace tidy, with everything organized and in the correct place. What is your opinion about this v.2

Currently, in COVID 19 more impressive is given on hygiene all over the world. There are lot of safety measures to save from diseases and viruses. Cleanliness and organization I assential in life. My point of view is residential places and work places should be kept neat and in order below I will elaborate my thoughts. Firstly, residential areas are the places where one spend all your time if it is kept filthy consequently emerge problems for the residents. Individuals cannot perform even their life activities very well for example, wanderers spends their whole life migrations one place to another no sequence of their life style so definitely have no future plans. In order to achieve a desired aim one should plan his life like wise regulation is important in ones life in order to achieve success. If there is dirt and trash every where no body will be willing to reside there. Moreover it ends to production of several pathogens that effect residents consequently cause illness which is harmful. Secondly, every thing in life require order and mentainence. If it is lacking than one should not expect better rewards. For example in my home I am sensitive about garbage disposal if it’s left due to some reason I become irritated and cannot perform even my minor tasks. That effect me to such an extent that i take no time to dispose it off. Similarly ordering things at home is another good habit that should be learnt to children from beginning. so that in future they will not face any problem and they will be use to. In my conclusion living place should be kept clean and tidy it’s the need of better life

Currently
, in Did you mean “COVID-19” or the alternative spelling “Covid-19” (= coronavirus)?COVID-19Covid-19
COVID 19
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given
 on hygiene all over the world. There are It seems that an article is missing. Did you mean “a lot of”?a lot of
lot of
 safety measures to save from diseases and viruses. Cleanliness and organization I Possible spelling mistake found.essential
assential
 in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheartgrowthsoulactivity
life
. My point of view is residential You use this word too often, consider replacing it withneighborhoodpointhousesitecommunityseat
places
 and work You use this word too often, consider replacing it withneighborhoodpointhousesitecommunityseat
places
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kept
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order
 below I will elaborate my thoughts. Firstly
, residential areas are the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withneighborhoodpointhousesitecommunityseat
places
 where one spend all your time if it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retained
kept
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 emerge problems for the residents. Individuals cannot perform even their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheartgrowthsoulactivity
life
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very
 well for example
, wanderers spends their whole You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheartgrowthsoulactivity
life
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place
 to another no sequence of their This noun is normally spelled as one word.lifestyle
life style
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 definitely have no future plans. In You use this word too often, consider replacing it withformstructuresystemruleregulationplan
order
 to achieve a desired aim one should plan his You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheartgrowthsoulactivity
life
 like wise regulation is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 in Did you mean “one’s”?one's
ones
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheartgrowthsoulactivity
life
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order
 to achieve success. If there is dirt and trash Did you mean “everywhere”?everywhere
every where
Did you mean “nobody”?nobody
no body
 will be willing to reside there. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Moreover,
Moreover
 it ends to production of several pathogens that effect residents consequently
 cause illness which is harmful. Secondly
, every thing in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheartgrowthsoulactivity
life
 require You use this word too often, consider replacing it withformstructuresystemruleregulationplan
order
 and Possible spelling mistake found.sentiencecontinencepertinence
mentainence
. “If” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
If
 it is lacking than one should not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipate
expect
 better rewards. For example
 in my home I am sensitive about garbage disposal if it’s This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 due to This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 reason I become irritated and cannot perform even my minor tasks. That effect me to such an extent that Is this the personal pronoun “I”? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 take no time to dispose it off. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Similarly,
Similarly
 ordering things at home is another This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 habit that should be Possible spelling mistake. ‘learnt’ is British English.learned
learnt
 to children from beginning. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.So
so
 that in future they will not face any Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).problem, and
problem and
 they will be Did you mean “used”?used
use
 to. In my conclusion living You use this word too often, consider replacing it withneighborhoodpointhousesitecommunityseat
place
 should be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retained
kept
 clean and tidy it’s the need of better Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph.life.life!life?life:life,life;
life